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DUBSTEP TUNE Feedback for feedback maybe?

Post by sub-life » Thu Jun 30, 2011 2:23 am

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Post by gen_ » Thu Jun 30, 2011 7:14 am

Drums sound solid, some on here might call them basic, but if you listen to my track spaceman you'll know that basic is not bad if they are effective. Sub is a Tad low, but that's because of the key you chose to play in. I personally would duplicate my sub track and lift one of them an octave. Then tweak the volume until I can only slightly hear the top one.

The main problem I can hear is lack of 'dressing'. There's no countermelodies or sfx or anything. At the majority of the time it's just the wub. The wub is inventive tho, just add some melodical content cos wubs alone aren't enough.

Feel free to comment on the tracks in my sig, just go easy on the first break of random Banger, I know the wobble is kinda weak lol

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Post by sub-life » Thu Jun 30, 2011 9:17 pm

yea i was thinking the same thing its still a work in progress :mrgreen: aha i was hoping to hear some feedback thanks mang much appreciated and i listened to random banger and i like the intro is pretty unique almost like video game sounding ha its way sick , and im listening to spaceman right now and its sick !
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Post by Lectric » Thu Jun 30, 2011 11:18 pm

work on your synthesis more. learn your software and create higher quality synth sounds, as some of these sound either jarring, flat, or empty. the drums could also use work. Layering, reverb, transient shaping, compression etc will all make for a better drum track. Also add variations, FX, and incidentals to keep the listener interested.
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Post by sub-life » Fri Jul 01, 2011 12:03 am

word i can feel that thanks for the feedback man greatly appreciated :mrgreen: im stil kinda new to producing electronic music but im stil learning more shit ! aha i checked out your tunes as well u got some cool stuff one of them sounds real atmospherical .. i think thats the word im looking for haha sick stuff
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Post by MrAural » Fri Jul 01, 2011 12:09 am

Not bad. Cant really give constructive. My knowledge is lacking.
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Post by sub-life » Fri Jul 01, 2011 1:03 am

haha fsho mr.aural i appreciate the feedback tho anyways !
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Post by Foreplay » Fri Jul 01, 2011 1:06 am

Nice, i like that signature sound. Wobbles sound abit messy.

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Post by sub-life » Fri Jul 01, 2011 2:35 am

thanks for the feedback foreplay and i know they kinda do :u: hahahah yea i been tryin to keep a certain sound tweakin them they kinda been bothering me honestly i think they need to get cleaner :mrgreen:
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Post by JLB » Fri Jul 01, 2011 11:44 am

Seems like the drums arent cutting through too well, could do with the sub coming up a little more in the mix too. The wobbles are very creative, just need that extra bit of polishing. Intro kills it, and although its not the style id personally listen to, I did enjoy it



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Post by Rukas » Fri Jul 01, 2011 5:27 pm

what i like to do is make many different drum beats and change the beat alot. also try having some more sounds like different but similar in a way wobbles. just to keep it sounding interesting. lets take zomboy and figure for instance. they are famous and all of there songs have many different sounds which link together. like figure has more high laser/needle sounds and awesome yois and pther shit like that. and zomboy has amazing drum beats which change all the time. it just gives the song more flow and creativity. but your sounds are pretty crisp and nice man :D

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Post by ilv1 » Fri Jul 01, 2011 5:37 pm

Intro: "Am I listening to Datsik - Havoc?"
The rest... Needs a lot of work. The wobbles don't go that well together, there are some volume issues with them and also the drums are boring.

Try working more on your sounds and samples to get a better texture and natural sound. Also, panning.

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Post by sub-life » Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:06 pm

ohh dam i see what u mean lol well i wasnt even aware of that till now i love that song sick sick , but i usually base a lot of my shit in the B or Bb minor so here i just went down the Bb harmonic minor scale il probaly change a it a bit now lol but yea i know what u mean i posted this one up real quick for some feedback and im taking everything in so i can make a better tune i really appreciate feedback thanks ! :mrgreen: i followed you on soundcloud you got some sick shit !
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