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Arehouse
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New track! What do you think?

Post by Arehouse » Fri Jul 01, 2011 2:18 pm

Hey guys check this new tune out and tell me what you think!
also link me to your tunes so I can give you some feedback too! ;-)
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Re: New track! What do you think?

Post by Downfall » Fri Jul 01, 2011 5:50 pm

like the first wobble but art around 1 minute when the other midrange bass comes it seems a little piercing.
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Re: New track! What do you think?

Post by SignalRecon » Fri Jul 01, 2011 6:04 pm

This is a good start, the only thing i really didnt like is around 1min where you have the "pitch up pitch down" bass, its been done a bunch of times in really bad tunes, I wouldnt put yourself on that boat. Keep it up bro!
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Re: New track! What do you think?

Post by StratoJazz » Fri Jul 01, 2011 7:45 pm

I really like your second wobble bass in this tune. My only thing with this track is you could make the Kicks and snare alittle bigger. I've found the best way to do this is to boost the lower end of the bass and boost the lower-mid as well as mids of the snare. At the same time, you cut the lower end of your wobbles slightly. Your track really calls for a huge kick as well as snare sound.

Other than that dude, i think your idea and composition is really good. Your synths are really good to man. Keep on cranking them out.
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Arehouse
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Re: New track! What do you think?

Post by Arehouse » Sat Jul 02, 2011 9:55 pm

Downfall wrote:like the first wobble but art around 1 minute when the other midrange bass comes it seems a little piercing.
hey thanks man, yeah i gotta polish it up a bit more this is still a work in progress.
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Re: New track! What do you think?

Post by Arehouse » Sat Jul 02, 2011 9:56 pm

StratoJazz wrote:I really like your second wobble bass in this tune. My only thing with this track is you could make the Kicks and snare alittle bigger. I've found the best way to do this is to boost the lower end of the bass and boost the lower-mid as well as mids of the snare. At the same time, you cut the lower end of your wobbles slightly. Your track really calls for a huge kick as well as snare sound.

Other than that dude, i think your idea and composition is really good. Your synths are really good to man. Keep on cranking them out.

hey thanks a lot man! when i go back to this i'm gunna test that out! big ups!
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Re: New track! What do you think?

Post by Arehouse » Sat Jul 02, 2011 9:56 pm

SignalRecon wrote:This is a good start, the only thing i really didnt like is around 1min where you have the "pitch up pitch down" bass, its been done a bunch of times in really bad tunes, I wouldnt put yourself on that boat. Keep it up bro!

yeah i'm gunna revamp this a lot, thanks for the feedback.
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