Really Chill Dub Tune Feedback for feedback?

[dennisslon]

http://soundcloud.com/dennisslon/the-weeknd

[thepatient613]

It's a sick tune. I'm not a heavy lyric fan so personally I would take all the ohwhowhow in the chorus lol.

I would say, make another track like this but with heavier kicks, really bright claps with lots of attack and add a really deep sub bass. That will probably sound amazing.

Well please let me know what you think about my track as well, thanks.

[davwuh]

i wouldn't say this is chill dub, but it's nice.. echo the above advice, tune desperately needs some sub bass and it would be good.. singing is nice, is that original or a sample?