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claps12345
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Shank Sinatra - Forget About Her

Post by claps12345 » Sun Aug 07, 2011 2:50 pm

Safe another chilled tune, wanted a more garagey feel on this.

Let me know what you think....

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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by claps12345 » Sun Aug 07, 2011 11:07 pm

edited ;)

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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by ElSonido » Mon Aug 08, 2011 12:39 am

Man, this is a kickin' track.

So good.

This is the kind of music I love to make when I get the chance.

Love the horns. Love the synths that are there.

The sub line may be a tad loud. I'd give it a bit of movement and stick an envelope on the volume/cutoff or something, but I love it.

I think the drumline could be even skippier in the second half, but once again, it's pretty flippin good. Lovely track.

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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by claps12345 » Mon Aug 08, 2011 7:06 pm

Safee man, I think I always over do it on the bass, get a bit excited with it haha. my sub isn't the best too, which doesn't help.

Comments mean a lot.

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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by aesthesis » Mon Aug 08, 2011 7:17 pm

These claps annoys me much. Would write more, but reviewing the sound itself is not the best idea, since I'm pinned to the notebook with integrated onboard sound. Built-in speakers doesn't make it any better.

Pretty nice tune, after all.
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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by claps12345 » Wed Aug 10, 2011 5:11 pm

I'm not too sure how to make it a more garage sound, mainly with the claps/snares, can anybody help?

Thanks for the comment though.

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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by Loz_Idea » Fri Aug 12, 2011 12:54 am

Real nice track, I agree though the claps need switching up.
wouldn't mind making a remix of this, maybe a slightly darker version
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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by paradigm001 » Fri Aug 12, 2011 5:08 am

I dont know garage at all. I think its a swing thing. If it is then youve got it. As for the tune its very sparse, I would add a string sound.,
...wanna collab? Im down for new sounds, send me a PM please.

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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by Chriis » Fri Aug 12, 2011 9:07 am

Really impressive sound you have there. I can't really find anything to fault (based on my limited knowledge :p) I'm just getting back into writing myself and I would be incredibly happy to produce something to this standard. Thanks for the inspiration :D

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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by wizeguy » Fri Aug 12, 2011 9:49 am

yea i'm liking it so far, i think you should get some rides in there maybe some shakers and/or tambourines. it sounds a bit empty in them frequencies.

really feelin that purple track!

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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by claps12345 » Fri Aug 12, 2011 4:12 pm

Cheers for all the good comments here!

Its all about the changing of the claps. Think I might have to do a re edit of this. Is it more of a rimshot than a clap you want to be using for a garage sound? I mean, the clap sounds a bit too "full", and a typical garage beat feels more skippy, this feels sudden. If that makes any sense?

Anybody got any tips for a garage beat?

I'm always down for helping others too if you like my sounds....

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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by particle-jim » Fri Aug 12, 2011 6:10 pm

i reckon you could swap the claps for a rimshot and use the claps for offbeats and fills, also the hats sound a bit straight, a bit of shuffle and swing in there would do wonders... tracks already sounding tight though man, im feeling that bass a lot
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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by claps12345 » Sat Aug 13, 2011 1:46 pm

Yeah man cheers, gonna switch it up soon, will post it back up when its done

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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by AxL » Sat Aug 13, 2011 2:45 pm

love the first track! really kick ass! just the sub is too mutch "sinewave" for me!

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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by Dolemite » Sat Aug 13, 2011 5:01 pm

amazing tune man feeling vibes nice bassline too Soundcloud

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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by claps12345 » Sun Aug 14, 2011 2:14 pm

cheers guys, still working on the bass!

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Re: Chilled garage style

Post by claps12345 » Tue Aug 16, 2011 5:03 pm

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