Chase & Status - Time ft. Delilah (Tom Wilson Dubstep Remix)

[TomW312]

First ive attempted to do, i know there are a few faults but id apprciate some feedback please

http://soundcloud.com/tomwilsonnn/chase ... step-remix

Thanks

[lojik]

Hey,

I think vocals are out of sync with kicks in the intro, don't sound quite right. Not sure whats happening with the drop but everything sounds out of time - beats keep coming in really early and stuff and its definitely not in 4/4 time signature (pretty much essential for a piece of dance music). All sense of melody is gone as well and I'm not sure that weird square wave lead thing is doing but it sounds a bit like you've randomly put some notes in a step sequencer.

My advice would be go back to basics and learn a bit about theory - time and key signatures and learn how chords and melody work so you can put things in a tune that compliment each other.