Edsteppa - the swarm

[robwobwob]

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I made this track this the first track i made i really like, but i would like your opionins and feedback.

[Anakratis]

Nice sounds!

Let me start rant mode: the hihats at the beginning are a little bit cheesy IMO; your mixdown is clipping at times; your song is a type where the wobbles take control of the sound, and they get a little repetitive, so I would variate those more; needs more synth; needs a breakdown/slow moment.

Overall, you got the wobble concept down, but there are some changes that could be made to make it sounds better.

Keep at it!

[robwobwob]

thnx man i gonna edit it soon and post it i think your right about the wobble i gonna try to get it more variated i will post it asp. i have an qeustion tho does anyone maybe have some tips about how i can my wobble more proggesive ?

[JAWSOME]

nice one man, your definitely on the right road with this one, the ratio's on the bass at 1:44 kind of put me off tho.. the drums could use a little improvement but other then that man you got a nice track here.. try be carefull when adding distortions to your bass aswell, (not sure if thats what you have done here) but it is a little distorted in some parts..

[robwobwob]

ye i did @ the bitcrusher to the bass soo it has some drive you think its to much ?

[robwobwob]

Soundcloud so ive edited it think its a big improvement but what do you guys think ?

[Shaion]

I'd suggest editing any updates into the first post as well.

Now the track itself sounds pretty good. Though loosen up a bit on that bitcrusher still.

Definitely on the right track though. Keep it up!

[robwobwob]

next time i wil update it in the first post. and thnx for your opinion.