Fen Bynch - Paper Planes (Remix/filth)

[5impleben]

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[Triphosphate]

I'm really sorry dude, I really don't want to sound like a douche, but you didn't even come CLOSE to lining up the a Capella properly. Like at all. Which is a crying shame cause the instrumentation you did where the vocals aren't playing isn't half bad. But you really need to try again on the vocals. And I laughed out loud at the modern warfare "let's do it"

[5impleben]

Nah it's good that you're telling me that. I've listened to it about 30 times so it sounds fluid to me.

[Shaion]

Everything seems so.... off. O_____o

It's like... Absolutely everything had a different tempo there. Haven't heard a cacophony like this since... Never, I think. Even the LFOs of the drop seem off-beat.

I don't mean to offend, but... You really have some catching up to do on basic music theory and composition.

[5impleben]

Yeah I've never done any music theory or anything like that which probably noticed.

[Shaion]

Yeah, well... However unimportant it may seem, maybe especially in electronic genres, I can assure you, it's just as important, whether you're composing filthy basslines or a violin solo.

Once you understand even the very basics, you'll begin to make... A LOT more sense in your music.

All the best, man!