Nite Life - Bus Stop (130 bpm)

[Nite Life]

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Potentially an intro sort of song. Feedback is appreciated.

[kiene]

i love how you panned out that "once upon a time sample"

i like the drums too reminds me of autonomic

[Tino_Be_Like]

I would love to drop a bass drop to this.... if you were to ever put out stems lol

[jeanblanc]

There's a lot of good things going on in this. The understated drums are cool and I think you've done a good job on the sax (?) sample. I agree with Tino_Be_Like's point as well, I think that from 0.45 onwards you have got what is a potentially really good intro and then the song ought to progress onto something more. I think how you do that would be purely down to what you wanted the song to be in the end, it could be a properly bassy drop or you could possibly add/change part of the melody and add something more to the drums (4 4 beat would be interesting), or something completely different, but I think it really needs progression. Definitely something good to build on.

[Nite Life]

By properly bassy drop, do you mean making them more punchy? On my subs the bass line is already pretty heavy. I suppose I could make a different chord progression as well.... Thanks for all comments, I'll repost after I've made significant changes

[Nite Life]

Newest version....made some pretty big changes....

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[jeanblanc]

Yeah def prefer this vision, very nice chilled feel to it and the progression is more interesting than the previous one and I especially like the way you brought the sax back in later in track.

[Tino_Be_Like]

Nice, little more edgy there yeeee