Finished my first house track would like some feedback

[Codox]

Can you guys give me some feedback on how this track is, its my first attempt at house.

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[tuckerlinen]

i've been getting into house lately. There's still so much I haven't learned about the genre so I can't be that helpful. I bet you danced to this in your room, didn't you? ha. I would appreciate some vocal sampling. Also, there's not much going on over the beat. It needs a bassline. if you had some organic bass over this it could be really cool, but as it is there's nothing to look at. If that makes sense.

[kava]

listen to fela. and D-train.

[BASED]

i would stay away from progressive house..... your song needs some soul!

[um4mi]

Hi i think you did a good job with thhis, the production and everything is good and sounds smooth.. I do feel that you might need to make it more interesting.. If i were you i would add a good dollop of weirdness in there.. try using some unusual sounds that you wouldn't normally put in this track, or use some drum sounds that you wouldnt normally hear in this kind of tune.. just to give you some ideas maybe..

Have you heard Rustie's new stuff? He has some tracks with riffs like this one but then he totally turns the whole thing upside down with his unusual drums and sound design.