Jobai - Uncovered (Deep/Future Garage)

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Jobai
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Jobai - Uncovered (Deep/Future Garage)

Post by Jobai » Mon Oct 24, 2011 12:34 pm

Another new tune from myself...

as always your thoughts are appreciated

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jeanblanc
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Re: Jobai - Uncovered (Deep/Future Garage)

Post by jeanblanc » Mon Oct 24, 2011 3:14 pm

I like it a lot, great atmosphere, the drums sound good and I love the little snippets of vocals. I think the whole thing would be much more powerful if you added a lot more variation, probably even a different part entirely that would offer some contrast to what you have already, it does seem to be mostly the same loop repeating through the song (even if it is a very good loop). I would also add and take away bits of percussion through the track. I like the hat sounds that you've used, but I would change it around a bit, adding different sounds as the song progresses and changing rhythms subtly. But overall, really good.

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