G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F

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Hey guys, here's a track i've been working on for the past few days. This is only the rough mix but i'd like to know what you think, what you like/don't like about it and what i could add/remove to improve the track. I will be returning feedback to people who leave me a link to their thread.

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Also if anyone knows of any labels that may want to pick this one up, please let me know! But if not then i will hand out 320s to anyone who asks for one .

Enjoy!

[Electric_Head]

cool track man, really not what I expected from the build-up
nice sub, nice beat.
all good

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cool track man, really not what I expected from the build-up
nice sub, nice beat.
all good

Thanks man, i appreciate that! I'm gonna check out your track now.

[mimosa]

good unconventional strings. the intro is too long though. sorta anticlimatic. the biuld is generic to me.

http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=225301

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good unconventional strings. the intro is too long though. sorta anticlimatic. the biuld is generic to me.

http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=225301

Thanks for the feedback, yeah i kinda thought the intro was abit long but i wanted that little break before it drops, and yeah i'm not that great at intros it's usually the last thing i do and gets rushed so i will definatly work on that. Gonna check yours out now.

[sobie]

this is beautiful man, the subbass is wicked powerful, and your drums sound so clean.. i'd say develop the intro some more like mimosa had said.

http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=225508
^ i just posted a final version of a tune here

[ReachZenith]

The track is great man, really enjoy the tom work that you have in there!

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this is beautiful man, the subbass is wicked powerful, and your drums sound so clean.. i'd say develop the intro some more like mimosa had said.

http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=225508
^ i just posted a final version of a tune here

Thanks man! I really appreciate it, i'm gonna go back into it 2morow and fix up that intro

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The track is great man, really enjoy the tom work that you have in there!

Thanks mate! I really wasn't sure about that tom roll at first but then i really got to like it so i kept it in there.

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Anyone else ?

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Bump...anymore feedback guys ?

[fiveone]

sounds great... pretty chillin'/vibin' > i reckon the ambiance should be kept to a minimum during the verses and kept for the build-ups to the drop. maybe a darker/deeper synth would be cool? sounds pretty solid though still. big!
fb4fb? viewtopic.php?f=23&t=225693

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sounds great... pretty chillin'/vibin' > i reckon the ambiance should be kept to a minimum during the verses and kept for the build-ups to the drop. maybe a darker/deeper synth would be cool? sounds pretty solid though still. big!
fb4fb? viewtopic.php?f=23&t=225693

Thanks man, thinking of adding another synth in there to keep it more interesting. Just left feedback on your thread now aswell.