WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

[LukeRaith]

@ascian - fucking quality work mate, your beat fits perfectly when the vocals, i think your right about the tom toms, takes the groove away a bit, but apart from that top top work

ive totoally redone the wip i posted eariler today, made it into a 115bpm house track if your interested, if you leave a comment on the soundcloud link, ill make sure i write you one back!

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[broadus]

@Reliq Really like that, super dark, you really got the dungeon feel going there.
@LukeRaith Really like the House version, sounds really nice and warm.
@mattdesl Nice clean top end, production sounds good. Like the synths.

Pretty new to producing, so sorry i couldn't give anymore technical advice.
here's a tech house thing i've been working on today, let me know what you think. I don't have monitors so the mixdown might be terrible, so tell me if anything is horribly wrong. Cheers.
Btw, the track is unfinished. i don't intend it to trail off at the end, i just couldn't be bothered doing anymore today.

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[BOMAN]

@Ascian I fucking love this, so chill, i cant find anything bad about it...
@LukeRaith Nice one! I love it, makes me happy!
@broadus Im not into this music, but i can tell you this, i loved the vocal sample!


Heres a "dirty" house song im working on, i want to know what you guys think about it, and what i can change/add etc. Im trying to make it a banger, but dunno if im succeeding or not

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[daeMTHAFKNkim]

My tuneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Feedback is great
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[Ascian]

My tuneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Feedback is great
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Just to warn you mate, you have to feedback on AT LEAST 3 people before posting a tune for feedback yourself or you probably won't receive any..

[Alexandercunningham]

Ascian - The thing that happens around 2.16 is a bit weird and should be reconsiderd. But it gets good again after 2.30something.
Otherwise, great tune! Right up my alley!

daeMTHAFKNkim - Nice work, don't really know what to say tho, other than it kinda sounds too much the same the entire song out basicly.

broadus - Nice work on the sample! I feel like throwing some songs at ya for inspiration but i get the feeling you've probably already heard it.


Heres my little wip. I know the bassline needs some work in the melody. But im wondering what i could add synthwise or mabye basswise.
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[broadus]

@Alexandercunningham thanks, i'm all ears beacuse it isn't something I would normally produce but I thought the vocal would fit that kind of track perfectly. The more inspiration the better. Your track is sick, love the echoey drum that comes in after the second drop. I think the bassline could do with a bit more movement, maybe something like pangaea - router?

[Alexandercunningham]

@Alexandercunningham thanks, i'm all ears beacuse it isn't something I would normally produce but I thought the vocal would fit that kind of track perfectly. The more inspiration the better. Your track is sick, love the echoey drum that comes in after the second drop. I think the bassline could do with a bit more movement, maybe something like pangaea - router?

Heres some tunes i think you should go through:
Mount Kimbie http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GRVwtSmgKP8
Jaqcues Greene - koreless mix http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3BzzFHpE3y8
xxxy - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tqAB8kAU ... re=related
T.Williams - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QDO9RIIkR3k
Throwing Snow & Py - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LsNPCE36 ... re=related


Another thing about your track is that you should reconsider the bassdrum rythm/pattern, its a bit un-original/boring. Kimbie, Koreless and throwing snow are great inspirations for that.

[broadus]

Ah yeah, cheers, that's given me some good ideas. I did think the straight 4 beat made it maybe a little too trancy or cheesy at times if you know what i mean.

[elyhess]

@Cubicle: The use of the horn and piano is unique, interesting song

@Sam: I love the vocals, way sick. But I feel like the kick is like to quite at some spots

@Craggle: Solid production, sometimes I feel like the transitions aren't as smooth as others, but I really like it!

Let me know what you think of my song!

[orangeapplesauce]

elyhess - I love the feel and ideas, i feel like i wanna hear some more upper range but thats just an idea. i like the sounds in the intro but it went by a little fast, i kinda wanted more.

Alexandercunningham - I love the synth at the beginning but i don't think that drum hit fits, but when the other drums come in i love the vibes, Chilean grooves.

lukeraith - it drags along, i think its because the speed. it also sounds like Christmas music. idk not really my style i guess

Tell me what you think of this unfinished tune...
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[Alexandercunningham]

Alexandercunningham - I love the synth at the beginning but i don't think that drum hit fits, but when the other drums come in i love the vibes, Chilean grooves.

Tell me what you think of this unfinished tune...
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What do you mean about the drum hits? Which part?

Bout your song, other from beeing very good and spot on. The only thing im a bit not as sure about is the drum sound. The sound of the bassdrum and snare. Listen to Cookie Monsta, skream, benga, borgore... etc. More in that direction and i think it will be alot heavier over all.

[orangeapplesauce]

Alexandercunningham - I love the synth at the beginning but i don't think that drum hit fits, but when the other drums come in i love the vibes, Chilean grooves.

Tell me what you think of this unfinished tune...
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What do you mean about the drum hits? Which part?

Bout your song, other from beeing very good and spot on. The only thing im a bit not as sure about is the drum sound. The sound of the bassdrum and snare. Listen to Cookie Monsta, skream, benga, borgore... etc. More in that direction and i think it will be alot heavier over all.

it was about the snaps at the begining, i wasnt sure about it, but i tthink i grew on me

[_boring]

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@orangeapplesauce. dear god wtf is that.

@alexander cunnignham. very nice vibe. not a horrible mix. just need more layering and variation in the drums.

@luke raith, interesting, it reminds me of disney.

[Sunshaft]

boring I would add buildup and drop and try to add more distorted basslines

orangeapplesauce thats really good one, but drop needs sub, or I just dont hear any. and drums need boost in high end.

alexandercunningham nice pad sound, but I thing 50 seconds of intro would be enough, then it needs drop, or something different to change

boman thats like DJblend well but I am not into this music so it is difficult to help you. only that I can advice is to variate song a little

I did track in FL studio 8 only, without any plugins, but on cheapy speakers, so in might not sound the same on your speakers...

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[drooka]

@boring - nice tune, i like the synth, maybe put a bit of reverb or something on it to make it pop. digging the melody.

@elyhess - solid tune, not exactly into brostep or what have you, but i didn't mind this tune. could use a backing melody though and some work on the snare to bring it on the mix a bit

@alexandercunningham - nice chilled out tune, really dig where it's headed... maybe some volume enveloping on the bass to give it a bit of a groove with the tune? also, around 2:20 the pad seems to over power the rest of the tune a bit

here's my wip
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[Crow Steppa]

@ drooka- a little dry for my taste but your sound design isn't bad at all. maybe add some more soundcandy to make it less...empty.
@henoo- turn down that bass a bit and get some sub up underneath it, its all mids and highs and work on the automation sync.
@orange applesauce- again, sounds a little empty even after the drop. also work on balancing the sounds so they arent louder than one another. here is my latest WIP

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[Molzie]

Just want to get an opinion on this wip. does it sound out of time? any feedback appreciated.

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[Shum]

Yeah, some of the bassline riffs sound a bit out of time. The kick/snare is a bit too "in your face" for my tastes. You've got the ingredients for a decent track though Molzie.

[i11icit]

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This is my first attempt at a reese. I have previously been obsessed with making your typical brostep sounds but trying to move away from this and actually move on with production.

Love to get some tips / suggestions (specifically on the bass) just so I know I am on the right track. I haven't done anything special with the drums, I was more focusing on the bass and couldn't be bothered layering them at this point, they are just EQd and have some parallel compression / reverb.

Anyway let me know what you think