Had ableton for 5 days. This is what I have come up with

[AtTheMoment]

Hi guys,
I have been a lurker for a little bit now, love dubstep, but just recently got abletonlive and decided to try my hand at some music.
Here are three one and a half ish minute clips I have made so far.

It is really hard to get actual constructive criticism on tracks! (atleast on sound cloud)
I haven't learned to master properly yet or anything (working on it right now) and please keep in mind I have had ableton live for a total of a five or six days.

I think my intros are decent, but after the drop I don't feel like I have nearly enough energy! My songs sound slow and not intense enough. I am off to try and find some acapellas!
Thanks for reading this and taking the time to comment if you did. It means a lot to me!

First Attempt ever
Soundcloud

SecondSoundcloud

ThirdSoundcloud

I think I like #2 the best so far. Let me know what you think!