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[Standby]

@wearecorsairs its a feedback forum. don't try and be clever. you're shit at it and no one cares.

@freakquency. Thanks mate. not really something that i would normally listen to. every now and then theres bits that genuinely remind me of the prodigy. don't know if thats what you were going for...... i would bring the pad up a bit if it were me.

@cmgoodman1226 lucid - sick track. i would love to hear that if i was out. personally i'd like more sub action. not really sure about DnB mixes. sounds good to me though.

day dreaming - nice. i reckon theres room for a cheeky little electric piano melody or something. production sounds tight so far. definitely interested in the finished track.

@DJRaynes got a couple of ideas in there that could be deep. definitely needs sub bass. also i'd find a better snare sample

@naroja lana del rey remix - really wanna know what you're thinking of doing with it. drop keep it chilled or what??? sounds sick for now.

orchrender dub - haven't got a clue what to call it but its fuckin cool. i wouldn't even do anything to it. just keep it for jokes. haha i like it

@ericgasparr thanks man. i would give you feedback but the tune ain't there

@subfect up for a collab. i'll add you. i've only just signed up for AIM. not even used it yet so you'll have to be patient. speak soon. peace

THANKS FOR ALL THE FEEDBACK!

MY NEW WIP. Started this in the morning. little bit different to the normal. i know the bass is fucked. What you sayin??
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[ericgasparro]

standby should be there now man cheers

[DJRaynes]

@antman - keys sound really good mate, but the bass sounds like it needs some development and variation.

@Bodom418 - Track sound fairly well mixed to me, mid-range is nicely defined but not too harsh. Don't think the style of the track would suit a really tense build up, sounds good as it is to me

[s3b]

@eldoogle - Pretty nice work, I would work on the buildup. maybe add a riser and sweep there to give it a more full sound. Liking that second drop

@antman - like the intro, the drums seem to come out of nowhere though, and the buildup should lead directly into the breakdown instead of that few seconds of silence and wobs. Other than that its a pretty solid track. keep at it!

@bodom418 - Really digging this track! nice work here. as for making the buildup better, I would make the drums come in earlier, they seem to come in a tad late. Other than that this is a really sick track!

Now heres mine, nothing special but its my best work so far in the small amount of time I have been doing this
Enjoy:
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[s3b]

Woops
sorry about that double post

[ericgasparro]

@sb3 lovely stuff, would like a slightly sub heavier drop though! just make it a little more weighty

[bodom418]

s3b, this is really cool. Didnt expect that drop, fuckin gangsta! haha but yeah. The snare needs to be brought up a bit; are you layering snare samples?If you already are, maybe look into your compression. really cool though man

[Hero]

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[Hero]

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[Hero]

Soundcloud il be leaveing feedback tommorow bruvs its 3 in da morn here.

[Hero]

Soundcloud il be leaveing feedback tommorow bruvs its 3 in da morn here.

[Burgeamon]

@standby
Really like the percussion in the intro. Kick and snare are nice. Really nice and chilled out. The sub sound maybe needs a touch less decay to define the notes a little more?

@DJRaynes
I like it but I think once the kick comes in id gets a little muddy. The lower mids seem to be clashing ever so slightly.

@s3b
The kick / snare in the intro is really drowned out but tbh, i might just get rid of them there tbh. Once it drops its way too muddy and the kick/snare have no power at all.

@cmgoodman1226
Really liking the build up and the drop is solid with the drums punching through really nicely. Good sounds as well! Nice work.

@naroja
Video games remix sounding good so far. Really wanna hear where this one goes!

@eldoogle
You got some good core bass sounds there that with a lil processing could sound great. Percussion is lacking a bit, you could fill out the highs with some hats/white noise etc.. Get a meatier snare involved as well, but sounding cool.


Ok, here's a remix i've been working on. No EQ at all yet or compression. No bass processing either. Gonna do that and mix it down over the weekend but I really need to work on processing the mids and filling it out a bit. Any advice?

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[DJRaynes]

Took into consideration some of the previous comments, also adjusted the levels slightly.
What you guyses think?

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[InTheCrowd]

@Burgaemon Everything sounds right and works well. I'm not really into that sound but I can appreciate what you have made. Keep it up nothing really for me to add that you havent said you will already cover.

@Hero I'm feeling this wish the clip was a bit longer but yeah I am digging what you got going loving the tribaly vibe look forward to hearing more.

@s3b I'd say the mid bass is sorted just work on a attention grabbing intro the way the drops planned out works. Just really add some more elements!



Something I been working on, thought I would try something different. Any feedback appreciated!

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[DJRaynes]

@Standby - Nice panning work, the bass definitely needs work! Sounds too loose, The attack and decay both need shortening IMO. The reverb sounds cool. Think you should get on with finishing it, cause it sounds pretty sick

@S3b - Sounds like you've some clashing frequencies when the bass kicks in, try EQing the kick and bass so they don't peak at the same points. Also after the breakdown I think it should build up and drop more quickly. Some nice sounds though, keep at it

[blakedipp]

@Burgeamon - I had my head nodding the entire time. I really like the chords in the intro. The levels sound mixed pretty well. Sounds pretty professional! Good job!

@DJ Raynes - Your track is pretty heavy. Your kick sounds drowned out by the sub though. With some EQ, it will sound even more awesome.

@In the Crowd - Diggin your track! The intro is cool. I think the kick could use some more thump to give it a little more presence.

Here is my WIP. It's still a baby so I have a lot of work to do. Just want to get an opinion on the mixdown and EQing. Give me some feedback!!


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[MaZa1]

@s3b: Nice work, kick and snare maybe little too powerless.
@bodom418: Loving that tune! Nice drop, drums sound just about right
@Burgeamon: Sounds like it almost doesnt even need eq and those things ok yes it does, but still sound great, waiting to hear finished track!

Ok here's something i cooked up when i was bored Just a little eq and compress, gonna add some attmosphere and synths, or something not sure yet

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[ScarletCyanide]

Hey guys, it's late and I'm exhausted, but I really wanted to chuck the intro for a song I'm working on, up here so I could get some feedback and thus move forward with it! I appreciate the drums are a bit quiet / not very well mixed currently, otherwise please give it a check and tomorrow when I get some more time I will give feedback on everyone who gave feedback on this, as well as 3 above me

Thanks! ;D

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[subfect]

Guys, said it before, saying it again - if you have time to put up a wip, take the time and respect and respond to others' first. Otherwise DON'T POST!!!!!

[ericgasparro]

@SB3 sick stuff sounding proper weighty now, bring the highs up a tad i think!

@ bodom418 proper chill man to begin with. loving it, liking the drum pattern! didnt see that drop coming neither!! fuckin hell. (anscession)

Hero needs some bass man, cant feel any sub off it, a nice slow underlying sub would set it off. preccusions is delish though

dj raynes i'd like the snare to creep out a little more tbh. nice track though got a lot of potential. a few different reeces to chop it up a bit would be a nice addition.

inthecrowd probably my fav so far, loving that bassline, porper heavy. cant fault it really, a little burst of 4*4 time would be cool

wil the give the others a listen later. heres mine

http://soundcloud.com/eric-gasparro/pharaoh-dub