first tune i'm ever asking for feedback on (wip)

[eyeatus]

it's the tune in my sig. going for a dark/chill vibe.

leaving feedback at some other tunes right now. down for a collab if anyone wants stems.

i'll be sure to check your stuff out if you leave feedback.

thanks for listening

[Regret]

Yo!

You've got the layout down right.
I'm not big on the industrial sounds so I'll leave that to someone else.

This doesn't drop. There's no sure-fire way of getting anything to drop, it's more of a feeling than a technique, remember: SPACE - PACE - BASS.

Layer subbass under the track. If your mixdown is great you won't really have to fiddle too much with it, just a simple rhythm on the go, but if you need to, don't be afraid to put a little compression on your kicks, but don't over-compress because it'll sound pretty shitty. imo

Make your drums less repetitive.
And mix the track up a little bit, change of key perhaps? Take something out? You can figure something out.

Good luck.

[Shred]

dam this is dope, contact Pandora

for real tho i like your style

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Not my thing but ignore the waste comment above saying you should layer it with sub, I can feel that sub man. Geeza clearly needs some better monitors.