Broken Elegance - Electric Angel(MelodicDubstep)

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BrokenEleganceMusic
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Broken Elegance - Electric Angel(MelodicDubstep)

Post by BrokenEleganceMusic » Mon Mar 05, 2012 5:43 pm

Hi this is my first dubstep song so i would like creative feedback and comments! :)

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Re: Broken Elegance - Electric Angel(MelodicDubstep)

Post by wub » Wed Mar 07, 2012 8:08 am

Really like the vibe of this, the pads are lush and the whole thing really has a nice feel to it, proper lush. However, I feel the drums are quite flat. The kick lacks any weight, and the snare is very flat.

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Re: Broken Elegance - Electric Angel(MelodicDubstep)

Post by BrokenEleganceMusic » Sun Mar 11, 2012 6:05 pm

Thanks for Feedback ill remember those tips with my next track! :)

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Re: Broken Elegance - Electric Angel(MelodicDubstep)

Post by Shaion » Sun Mar 11, 2012 6:59 pm

Really nice atmosphere. Though as mentioned, the percussion needs some more work and... The movement in the bass seems... Incredibly random.

Overall, it lacks energy and the drops should have a lot more weight. Keep up the good work!

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Re: Broken Elegance - Electric Angel(MelodicDubstep)

Post by KoenDercksen » Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:18 pm

I agree with what has been said! Drums are too low and too flat in general... Pads are great though, sound almost like guitar feedback! Love that part of the song.

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Re: Broken Elegance - Electric Angel(MelodicDubstep)

Post by BrokenEleganceMusic » Thu Mar 15, 2012 12:11 pm

Thank you guys! I am working on with new track and i am going to remember those tips and also work with "weak spots" :)

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