This is a house track i just yesterday released, its not completely finished, but im not getting any feedback on it, so im posting it here in hopes ill get some suggestions for this song, and future tracks. thanks!
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House track i made, looking for feedback
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House track i made, looking for feedback
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Plastician wrote:what did the multivoice synth say to the lumberjack? TIMBRE
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Re: House track i made, looking for feedback
Okay i listened to the whole thing and have some suggestions. I think that synth sound you have from the beginning clashes with the piano at times. You should either spend a bit of time eq-ing these or just change that synth to something else (which is what I would do, I don't think it does much for your song.) You should spend some more time on the percussion. The hat gets pretty annoying, I think overall it could benefit from some better drum samples. Towards the middle the song gets really repetetive. The song never really progresses, it definitely needs a change up somewhere along the line.
Hope that helps you some, just my 2 cents.
Hope that helps you some, just my 2 cents.
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Re: House track i made, looking for feedback
that helps alot actually! thanks!
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Plastician wrote:what did the multivoice synth say to the lumberjack? TIMBRE
Re: House track i made, looking for feedback
there IS a feedback thread within the house forum
you give feedback, you get feedback, works out great
you give feedback, you get feedback, works out great
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Re: House track i made, looking for feedback
oh sorry didnt see it, thanks!rayman612 wrote:there IS a feedback thread within the house forum![]()
you give feedback, you get feedback, works out great
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Plastician wrote:what did the multivoice synth say to the lumberjack? TIMBRE
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