Greg Longman - Enter The Night (Kill The Noise style)

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Greg Longman - Enter The Night (Kill The Noise style)

Post by GregLongman » Mon Mar 12, 2012 4:23 pm

What's up guys,

I'm Greg, 18 and from the UK. I've just put up a current version of one of my tracks called Enter The Night. I'm not really sure of what kind of sub-genre it is, but when I was making it it reminded me of Kill The Noise (and dare I say it, Skrillex?)

This is my first post here and I'm not really sure what reaction I will get.

Here's the link:

http://soundcloud.com/monsterstep/enter-the-night

Cheers,

Greg.

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Re: Greg Longman - Enter The Night (Kill The Noise style)

Post by Echo » Mon Mar 12, 2012 4:24 pm

Sound cloud appears to be down right now. Will listen lster.

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Re: Greg Longman - Enter The Night (Kill The Noise style)

Post by GregLongman » Tue Mar 13, 2012 11:30 am

Echo wrote:Sound cloud appears to be down right now. Will listen lster.
Okay, thanks! SoundCloud is back up and running by the look of it.

Bump.

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Re: Greg Longman - Enter The Night (Kill The Noise style)

Post by GregLongman » Wed Mar 14, 2012 10:33 am

Anyone? I would love some feedback.

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Re: Greg Longman - Enter The Night (Kill The Noise style)

Post by Electric_Head » Wed Mar 14, 2012 10:49 am

add more to the beat
it`s so unrythmical, all this stop start stop start nonsense, it`s just too much
don`t loose focus of the fact that it`s dance music and therefore needs to be danceable
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Re: Greg Longman - Enter The Night (Kill The Noise style)

Post by Shaion » Wed Mar 14, 2012 5:15 pm

The beat is incredibly weak...

Bring the kick and snare up a bit, EQ the higs and high-mids better so they don't drown everything.... The ideas are great, but the mixing needs a lot more work.

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Re: Greg Longman - Enter The Night (Kill The Noise style)

Post by GregLongman » Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:57 am

Thanks for listening gents, much appreciated. I definitely follow up on the feedback.

To make the best more interesting would you suggest more percussive elements and effects?

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Re: Greg Longman - Enter The Night (Kill The Noise style)

Post by Electric_Head » Thu Mar 15, 2012 12:29 pm

Definitely more percussion.
I`d say the stop go feel of the track really detracts from any kind of beat.
Focus more on your beats and try to incorporate the midrange.
Rather than all midrange and minimal beat.

Try to time your beats and mid-range cuts.
EQ everything to reduce clashing frequencies.
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