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Chris mack
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Shlohmo esque Track I made. Feedback welcome. Free 320s

Post by Chris mack » Thu Mar 29, 2012 8:45 am

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Re: Shlohmo esque Track I made. Feedback welcome. Free 320s

Post by travis_baker » Thu Mar 29, 2012 3:45 pm

good mix, i dont like rap but, goot tune

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Post by Chris mack » Fri Mar 30, 2012 10:07 am

Thanks mate, seems to be the response I am getting haha :)
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Post by Electric_Head » Fri Mar 30, 2012 11:09 am

it`s good, definitely better without the vocal imo.
It works but it`ll be better without, as illustrated later on in the tune where everything comes into it`s own ex the vocal.

imo it`s not very slomoish though.
but it is what it is and stands on it`s own without the reference
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Post by Chris mack » Sun Apr 01, 2012 2:26 am

Thanks dude, Appreciate the feedback. The only way in which I thought it was "Shlohmoish" Is in the juxtoposition between the dirty south raps and the smooth, sultry chords and beats. Cheers for the comment :)
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Post by Shinefeld » Sun Apr 01, 2012 3:10 am

I actually really like rap, but I gotta agree. Get rid of the vocals and it would be a killer. Still, great stuff!

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Post by Chris mack » Tue Apr 03, 2012 11:36 pm

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