EatTheFood - End Of Time (Dark / Electronica / Dubstep)

[EatTheFood]

Here's my more Electronica oriented track, still in the Dubstep style.
Need some feedback. Hope you enjoy

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[Maccaveli]

Awesome atmosphere and I love the intro, but maybe turn the bass down just a little bit. I had to turn my speakers down cos it sounded like they were gonna blow haha. Also kinda squashes the rest of the track, which is a shame cos there's some awesome sounds in there.

[EatTheFood]

maybe turn the bass down just a little bit. I had to turn my speakers down cos it sounded like they were gonna blow haha.

Yes, I was thinking of turning them down a little
But still thanks for the advice
I uploaded it like that 'cause my speakers are kinda shitty and don't have a real good sound

Otherwise what do you think about the general composition and construction of the track ?

[DemonShift]

I think the composition is great! Everything seems to be in just the right spots to keep it interesting!

[Maccaveli]

It's simple but effective, very good work. Couldn't hurt to add a bit more variation in those booms, like maybe a few bits where they hit twice in the space one would normally hit, you know? While I've got you, mind checking out my newest track?
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=241839

[AirFee]

I love what the bass is doing, so dark You could try pictching the bass boom so it has a litttle movement, but not too much cos it might remove from the ambience