Second Attempt at Dubstep. Feedback Please?

[IlliciT AcquiT]

This is my second dubstep track. I've been learning by reading and through trial and error. Let me know what you think, the good, the bad, the ugly, any advice or recommendations or questions. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZFjIbhlboo0

-Inlicitā (Illicit Acquit)
Giovanni Alighieri DeLarge

[djferry]

well the bass eats the kick im not the perfect person to say that because im not expert but i apreciate that, the freqs used on kick are the same as bass and toguether make the kick with less sound (o gosh sorry my english is realy bad xD) you need to see what freqs is using the instruments and then eq that parts or make something to dont eat that freqs and then all sounds sound in this position.

If im wrong, correct me then ill learn also xD

[IlliciT AcquiT]

I see what your saying, i was going for like a Lex Luger/808 kinda kick (mix sub bass and kick so it sounds like one sound) I had my laptop hooked up to my car's sound system so it probably sounds different from computer speakers too. and your english isn't that bad xD