First full song, feedback greatly appreciated

[neoalchemist]

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[neoalchemist]

Someone give me some opinions or feedback please, I need motivation and some tips.

[CVRS]

Loove the build up to the last chorus, that's sick. Have you thought about putting some leads on the track?

[neoalchemist]

Ya I've been working on it I just can't get anything that sounds right.

[neoalchemist]

Bump

[elyhess]

This caught my eye, one of the biggest problems i have with songs, is finishing them! lol

Anyways, i agree with CVRS, a chorus would be really cool! I know it can be hard to add highs when you've got a fluctuating bassline. I've been working on a similar song, and i actually just found some random Acapella from one of Afrojacks songs, and i've incorporated peices and bits of it into my song and it actually sounds really sick! But yeah dude, really sick, raging my sub!

[neoalchemist]

Thanks for the feed back and I'm working on adding more but I'm having a hard putting vocals in it, I can't get it to sound right, I have just been adding different audio effects.

[Manufacturedsoul]

Still needs a little more work like some more synth parts, and analog samples to break it up but i think its a good start for sure!

[neoalchemist]

Thanks and ill work on that.

[ThirteenNL]

Your reece is waaaay too present, try putting it more to back to give your other sounds more presence! That should make it much better

[neoalchemist]

More to back?