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Shane - Don't feel sorry

Post by ShaneDubstep » Sun May 27, 2012 2:51 am

Hello all, here is my latest track, i included female vocal, (finally made somthing with it), hope you enjoy :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HeR2BXwZ ... ature=plcp
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Thanks :)

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Re: Shane - Don't feel sorry

Post by ehbes » Sun May 27, 2012 2:11 pm

I actually think this could be really great some elements needs some better eq and a better snare (I hate the one your using here) as this could actually be pretty good
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Re: Shane - Don't feel sorry

Post by ShaneDubstep » Sun May 27, 2012 3:00 pm

Ok, thx for the feedback, ya i've been messing around with the eqs, the mix, i tried my best ahah, but that's pretty hard. :)
I'm sorry (lol) you don't like the snare, i pretty like it ^^'

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Re: Shane - Don't feel sorry

Post by ehbes » Sun May 27, 2012 3:09 pm

It seems way to messy for this type of track
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Re: Shane - Don't feel sorry

Post by ShaneDubstep » Thu May 31, 2012 4:09 pm

Anyone else?

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Re: Shane - Don't feel sorry

Post by MrMush » Thu May 31, 2012 5:08 pm

Snare is alittle airy. Little slow for my taste.. But you def got somethin goin.. Good job


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Re: Shane - Don't feel sorry

Post by Climax » Thu May 31, 2012 8:06 pm

im listening on my earbuds so it might just be that, but I really like the intro melody, it sounds great. but the drums just need a lot more punch and presence

and the bass needs more low end power and cleanliness

overall good start tho, def has potential

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Re: Shane - Don't feel sorry

Post by Today » Thu May 31, 2012 10:15 pm

agonizingly slow,, imo. but... not bad
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Re: Shane - Don't feel sorry

Post by ShaneDubstep » Fri Jun 01, 2012 10:27 am

Well thanks, didn't think it would seem that slow ahah and ya, i should have worked harder on the bass.
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Re: Shane - Don't feel sorry

Post by Light-Stories » Fri Jun 01, 2012 3:03 pm

What DAW and VSTis are you using? I would love to colab with you on this.

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Re: Shane - Don't feel sorry

Post by Talált » Fri Jun 01, 2012 10:37 pm

i like what you're going for here! this is good man keep it up!
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Re: Shane - Don't feel sorry

Post by ShaneDubstep » Sat Jun 02, 2012 12:57 pm

@Light-Stories I'm using FL9 and waw, a lot of Vsts... Massive, Nexus, Sylenth1, Wow, Ohmicide etc.... ^^

And thank u :)

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Re: Shane - Don't feel sorry

Post by mimosa » Sat Jun 02, 2012 4:50 pm

work on you mix. too loud. not catchy but i like some of the sounds

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