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								by wirez » Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:13 pm
			
			
			
			
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Would be really pleased if ya'll could share this on facebook along with my page if you enjoy it 
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								by PivotAX » Sat Jun 02, 2012 10:18 pm
			
			
			
			
			Wow, love the atmosphere and when the smooth bass kicks in around 1:55 it just fits so well.
One of the hits/snares that also starts at 1:55 sounds a bit distorted which doesn't make the song sound better. I like it though! 
Thumbs up!
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								by wirez » Sun Jun 03, 2012 12:45 am
			
			
			
			
			PivotAX wrote:Wow, love the atmosphere and when the smooth bass kicks in around 1:55 it just fits so well.
One of the hits/snares that also starts at 1:55 sounds a bit distorted which doesn't make the song sound better. I like it though! 
Thumbs up!
Cheers,
Traffic.
Hi Traffic,
Thanks for your feedback that's much appreciated. Indeed the crunchy distorted percussion is actually an intentional sound. I wanted this track to be raw and organic and not too clinical, hope this has worked and it sounds good instead of bad.
 
			
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by outbound » Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:45 am
			
			
			
			
			Very organic sounding man, I like the vocals that come in as well  

 
			
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by wirez » Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:59 am
			
			
			
			
			outbound wrote:Very organic sounding man, I like the vocals th
Thaliaat come in as well  

 
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								by Electric_Head » Mon Jun 18, 2012 8:32 am
			
			
			
			
			Good intro, builds nicely.
Track kicks in well, nice garage-esque beat.
Excellent overall ambiance and use of the vocal.
The beat can use some variation after the first mini-drop.
Nice track wirez
			
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
	
				
		
				
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								by wirez » Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:11 pm
			
			
			
			
			Electric_Head wrote:Good intro, builds nicely.
Track kicks in well, nice garage-esque beat.
Excellent overall ambiance and use of the vocal.
The beat can use some variation after the first mini-drop.
Nice track wirez
Thanks man, you're not the first to say about the lack of drum variations in my tracks, maybe it's something I'll look further into in the future.
 
			
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by jeanblanc » Tue Jun 19, 2012 6:19 am
			
			
			
			
			Very nice tune, great atmosphere and melody. I like the way there seems to be a lot going on but the focus is always the melody. I'd agree with Electic_Head about the variety on the drums, it's something you could take up a level quite easily with a bit of experimentation adding bits of percussion etc.
			
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
	
	
	
		
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