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Simpski
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Archonsteps

Post by Simpski » Sat Jun 02, 2012 7:43 pm

Yo, would like some feedback on this one, see if I could improve something :)

http://soundcloud.com/siimo-sistok/archonstepy
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PivotAX
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Re: Archonsteps

Post by PivotAX » Sat Jun 02, 2012 10:39 pm

The kick and snare pattern is nice but the kick is way to powerfull, it's killing my ears :P
Always remember that the kick should never overpower the synth and bass which it clearly doing.
I don't know what came at 1:43 but the kick or what it is is also way to overpowering.
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Re: Archonsteps

Post by outbound » Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:56 am

It sounds a bit muddy bro, try high-passing some of the elements in there to clean it up a bit. The bass/pad has got too much low-mid as well which can be shaved off to make things a bit more clearer.
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Simpski
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Re: Archonsteps

Post by Simpski » Sun Jun 03, 2012 10:06 am

Hmm, sounds like fairly simple adjustments, i'll get right on it :). TY
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