Ok another tune from me,140bpm chill tune.Plenty of sub for all you bass heads.
Again feedback given i will return the favour.
Hope you enjoy.
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Daydream(140bpm chill)
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Re: Daydream(140bpm chill)
Bump,feedback anyone???
Re: Daydream(140bpm chill)
This is really good, the melody is beautiful goes very well with the beat. I think using the breakbeat in the second part works very well also. There's good subtle variation throughout so it never feels like it's getting overly repetitive. I don't think you should change anything about it, great work.
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Re: Daydream(140bpm chill)
The kick seems a bit lifeless.
The sub can be turned up a bit and given a bit more presence/harmonic content.
I feel because the track is quite sparse, the sub should be a bit dirtier maybe.
Nice melodic lines, good ambient work.
The melody seems a bit loud and drowns out the percussion.
Your kick after the break is seriously weak.
Nice delayed, reverbed effects over the top.
It's pretty good, I'd say it just needs a fair bit of finessing.
The sub can be turned up a bit and given a bit more presence/harmonic content.
I feel because the track is quite sparse, the sub should be a bit dirtier maybe.
Nice melodic lines, good ambient work.
The melody seems a bit loud and drowns out the percussion.
Your kick after the break is seriously weak.
Nice delayed, reverbed effects over the top.
It's pretty good, I'd say it just needs a fair bit of finessing.
Re: Daydream(140bpm chill)
jeanblanc wrote:This is really good, the melody is beautiful goes very well with the beat. I think using the breakbeat in the second part works very well also. There's good subtle variation throughout so it never feels like it's getting overly repetitive. I don't think you should change anything about it, great work.
Re: Daydream(140bpm chill)
Thankyou electric critique taken on board.Electric_Head wrote:The kick seems a bit lifeless.
The sub can be turned up a bit and given a bit more presence/harmonic content.
I feel because the track is quite sparse, the sub should be a bit dirtier maybe.
Nice melodic lines, good ambient work.
The melody seems a bit loud and drowns out the percussion.
Your kick after the break is seriously weak.
Nice delayed, reverbed effects over the top.
It's pretty good, I'd say it just needs a fair bit of finessing.
Re: Daydream(140bpm chill)
Love this 
Especially with those strings underneath
Especially with those strings underneath
Re: Daydream(140bpm chill)
Yeah loving this, the musical elements would stand on their own without the beats. As Electric_Head has already stated the kick is weak after the break. For really powerful meaty kicks and snares I'd recommend "Vengeance Essential House" sample pack, they are perfect for Dubstep and other genres that need heavy percussion. But yeah great track hear in my opinion. 
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