A dirty take on avicii

[Dr Disrespect]

Here's the remix i did for avicii's fade into darkness for te remix comp....
LEt me know what you think, all feedback is appreciated!
Thanks
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[Dr Disrespect]

thoughts?

[baddis98]

up to 1:10 it was straight crap, after that it was beyond crap.

[OfficialDAPT]

Keep working on your sound design, after 1:10 you kind of just repeated the same low rumble over and over again.

[Dr Disrespect]

up to 1:10 it was straight crap, after that it was beyond crap.

well i'd like to see you do better after having been producing for about 2 months

Yeah it sounds a bit gritty and repetitive, i'm trying to work on that at the moment with switching up sounds.
Thanks anyway

[zillion]

Keep practicing, keep practicing mate.

[Dr Disrespect]

will do man

[Toolman4]

More novel sounds. Arrangement of your sounds aren't too bad, but that growl does need to not be so repetitive. Actually I'd find another main bass sound and use that sparingly. Also the top end of your kick is REALLY piercing. I'd revisit the mix-down. I honestly think this has potential. The sounds are all quite wet and noticeably delayed. As a whole, the effect should barely be noticeable. If it's a very verb'd out sound you're going for, again..it's overused. There should be some contrast so that the space is perceived and not washed out.

[outbound]

The first thing I'd say it the drums sound too distorted, not in a pleasing overdriven way but they just sound clipped or downsampled or something. I'd look into finding what's making that sound and try to minimize the damage.