Lakota - Sky Light

[Harribo]

Finished my new track 'Sky Light' would love to get some feedback of people.

Free download on the soundcloud if you like it.


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Lakota

[SKIN E]

Nice chords in the intro, really liking them, very psytrancey kick, I like them though , I don't know about the second louder kick you are trying to introduce in the intro, not so much into it but looking at the waveform that will be your main kick...

In the drop now I have to say your percussion is absolutely lovely! Still think the main kick is probably a little bit too loud and think it would give the whole track a lot more dreamy/wavey effect when that is more subtle.

The drum change in the 2nd drop is quite nice, fits in well, although I did prefer that more minimal feel, you are using nice samples though well chosen, there is a bleep around 4:06, that stops at 4:11, I really think you should keep that bleep going on the same tempo afterwards and slowly fade it out like it is a delay, that would for me add so much to your track. Also probably a bit more change in the chords, or even hit the same notes with a different synth at times would help I reckon. Really nice track though bigup!

PS> Downloaded it as well!

[Harribo]

Cheers bro

thanks for the feedback, i love how indepth uve gone i really appreciate that mate. i can see what your saying on certain points, im gna use some of ur tips in my next track.

Lovin 'Consume wisely' that uve posted. drums n percussion is soundin so good.
The eary darkness of the second track is dope absolutely love it mate.

[SKIN E]

No worries, keep it up you got nice vibe going! Thanks for the kind words, I got a fresh track up in the dubs board looking for some feedback called Reach if you're up for some bouncin

[jeanblanc]

I particularly like the delayed chords, they set a good atmosphere from the outset. The percussion is good in terms of sounds and feel and there are bits of variety to make it interesting. I could put the song on in the background and get lost in whatever I'm doing and I sometimes really like music to do exactly that. I reckon that you could take it up a level by adding a new element of some type. I'm not sure what, it could be a change of pace (ie, doubling the hats or similar and making more aof a break beat feel), a new melody or just doing something completely different for a while but I think there is a lot of potential in what you've already done and by working on it you could make it even better. That's just an idea though and I know what it's like to finish a tune and not want to go back and change it much, good work though.

[Kleos]

i like the large kick, it makes the tune heavy. & the vibe off the delay synth is great, followed u on soundcloud. deep tune

[Harribo]

cheers jeanblanc n Kleos, i appreciate the support

[outbound]

Really like the percussion and synths in this

[Harribo]

cheers outbound
love the kick n snare of temperament!