Stranger - The Wicker Man (Minimal/Dungeon/Dark)

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ArrenMog
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Stranger - The Wicker Man (Minimal/Dungeon/Dark)

Post by ArrenMog » Sat Jul 07, 2012 2:56 pm

Been working on this tune hard over the last couple of days getting it sounding as good as i can now just looking for some feedback, whether you like it, think it sounds well made, anything you'd tweak in the mixdown, the growly mid range sounds, just any tips at all to improve this.

I'm thinking this might be good enough to send round to a couple of dj's but i'm not sure if i'm just deluded having listened to it like 1000 times now :L

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Re: Stranger - The Wicker Man (Minimal/Dungeon/Dark)

Post by wubluv » Sun Jul 08, 2012 5:54 am

Erie intro... Vocal is suitably creepy. Mellow drop (which I guess is good in this genre). The middle breakdown was very brief and simple. I think you could afford to extend it. The violin (?) starting (?) at around 1:50 needs to be louder, it's good I'd like more of it. The bird caw effect sound is too faint, as well, at least against the bass. The outro is good, though maybe you could do something to switch it up a bit from the intro? Very nice, well put together.
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Re: Stranger - The Wicker Man (Minimal/Dungeon/Dark)

Post by ArrenMog » Sun Jul 08, 2012 1:33 pm

i know what your saying about the middle break down too breif this is just half the song haha the outro bit on this clip is the mid section breakdown, havn't come up with a second part to the song yet, but i know what you mean by saying my outro/middle section could do with switching up i just copied and paste the intro there for now but i'll try making the flute abit louder cheers for the feedback!

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Re: Stranger - The Wicker Man (Minimal/Dungeon/Dark)

Post by Maxadax » Sun Jul 08, 2012 2:04 pm

Love that synth. I really enjoyed listening to that! But I think you should work on the ending, maybe keep the drums going on their own for a bit? Iunno, it's up to you!

Good work!

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