Third Estate - Outer reach badasses ((WIP)(Stomper))

[D_Wilhelm]

My first tune! Would love to know what you experienced bassheads have to say about it. I could use all the feedback and constructive criticism i can get.
http://soundcloud.com/thirdestate/outer ... sses-w-i-p

[Toolman4]

instead of relying on just rhythm for novelty in the bassline, that same note gets boring. Make a melody yo.

[Gewze]

some high passed reverb on the snare wouldnt go a miss man, the screech that goes over the bass is FAT.
i like the metal influences in the track, some quick hits of a crash or splash could give it some power at the end of a section.
the kick sounds a lil flabby, if you cut the end of the sample off after it hits where it has the kinda deuh sound itd thump alot more

and some other notes like above said