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SeeDubya
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by SeeDubya » Sat Jul 21, 2012 5:35 am
Funny little tune I made today, and this is my first post, so hello everyone here
Soundcloud
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SeeDubya on Sat Jul 21, 2012 3:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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tjcoats97
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by tjcoats97 » Sat Jul 21, 2012 6:01 am
Very nice, loving those basslines. It's really got that Glitch Hop feel to it.
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theperfumedgarden
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by theperfumedgarden » Sat Jul 21, 2012 8:42 am
sounds good,maybe a few sounds could do with fattening up and a bit more layering or fx.otherwise wicked
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SignalRecon
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by SignalRecon » Sat Jul 21, 2012 11:27 am
Like the funky ass bassline in the intro. Not bad at all for a first post. I'm jealous I didnt get this much attention on my midtempo track I posted a little while back. If you want to check it its "Twistin' it up" in my SC.
Either way. Sounding decent to me, the only thing I noticed was that synth stab you have seems like its an octave too high, or maybe its just too glassy for me. I think you would get alot more out of it maybe droping it a bit lower and chording it, or using a more "Stringy" or Brassy one all together? Anyways, just speculation at this point. Track overall really wants to bump.
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by SignalRecon » Sat Jul 21, 2012 11:33 am
p.S. Alot more people will check your tracks here if you embed your SC link into your thread. When typing look at top of box and hit the "Soundcloud" button and it will even drop in a
Soundcloud thing where you can slip your link in the middle. It will come out looking all pro and shit when you hit submit. Ez bruv!
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SeeDubya
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by SeeDubya » Sat Jul 21, 2012 3:36 pm
Wow, thanks for all the postive and constructive feed back everyone! Finally a decent community where people actually listen.
Signal, which synth stab were you talking about ?
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SignalRecon
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by SignalRecon » Sat Jul 21, 2012 10:44 pm
SeeDubya wrote:Wow, thanks for all the postive and constructive feed back everyone! Finally a decent community where people actually listen.
Signal, which synth stab were you talking about ?
I marked off the synth im talking about on the track. I guess its actually a string already, it just has a weird resonance from the reverb perhaps making seem glassy to me. Either way, something in the brass section will go wayyyy better with this and the funk vibe. At least try dropping that synth patch down an octave if you don't feel like finding a new brass patch.
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SeeDubya
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by SeeDubya » Sun Jul 22, 2012 4:13 am
SignalRecon wrote:
I marked off the synth im talking about on the track. I guess its actually a string already, it just has a weird resonance from the reverb perhaps making seem glassy to me. Either way, something in the brass section will go wayyyy better with this and the funk vibe. At least try dropping that synth patch down an octave if you don't feel like finding a new brass patch.
I just fixed the one note, I can't quite find a good brass to fill in there though

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by SignalRecon » Sun Jul 22, 2012 9:33 am
SeeDubya wrote:SignalRecon wrote:
I marked off the synth im talking about on the track. I guess its actually a string already, it just has a weird resonance from the reverb perhaps making seem glassy to me. Either way, something in the brass section will go wayyyy better with this and the funk vibe. At least try dropping that synth patch down an octave if you don't feel like finding a new brass patch.
I just fixed the one note, I can't quite find a good brass to fill in there though

What software are you on?
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SeeDubya
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by SeeDubya » Mon Jul 23, 2012 5:01 pm
SignalRecon wrote:SeeDubya wrote:SignalRecon wrote:
I marked off the synth im talking about on the track. I guess its actually a string already, it just has a weird resonance from the reverb perhaps making seem glassy to me. Either way, something in the brass section will go wayyyy better with this and the funk vibe. At least try dropping that synth patch down an octave if you don't feel like finding a new brass patch.
I just fixed the one note, I can't quite find a good brass to fill in there though

What software are you on?
FL Studio 10
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