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Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
@bevoh - sounding really good man,it has a good groove. the overall reverb seems kinda strong right now.
@mthrfnk - mixdown sounds really good on this. im not personally in to trance, but this does sound professional imo.
@Ascian - big tune man! mix sounds really tight, an the drums sound really good. the synth work is really detailed man, this is forreal dope as fuck. tons of energy!
@hansvictoriayeeros - this tune is mental. sounds very oldschool. the ambiance in contrast the the drum work fits quite well. awesome track all around. sub is kinda strong.
tried tying up the bottom end of this a bit more. still seems the clash in some areas.
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@mthrfnk - mixdown sounds really good on this. im not personally in to trance, but this does sound professional imo.
@Ascian - big tune man! mix sounds really tight, an the drums sound really good. the synth work is really detailed man, this is forreal dope as fuck. tons of energy!
@hansvictoriayeeros - this tune is mental. sounds very oldschool. the ambiance in contrast the the drum work fits quite well. awesome track all around. sub is kinda strong.
tried tying up the bottom end of this a bit more. still seems the clash in some areas.
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@Houston Weather: sounding good mate intro especialy, love the sound of the bass/sub. maybe the snare could come down? not 100%...listening threw headphones. its very different mate and has a lot of cool ideas in it.
@cheezitzplz: make some space for the higher frequencies for your drums. ore maybe try brighten up the kik and snare a little...saturation on a send high passed maybe?... the general structure of the tune is great, the intro is fine mate i think it works. the breakdown is i little random maybe change some elements throw in a fill here and there.
@hansvictoriayeeros: ok this first tune is a deep one sounding ok. the mids may have to much bottem end, the snare needs to be more brighter... maybe layer it with a clap or something. but with a cleaner mix this tune is big.
2nd tune u had the 4x4 beat. the intro is good mate, like the white noise sidechained, and when the extra percution comes in although it becomes repetitive after while. like how bothe are going hope to hear them when thheir finished.
any feedback would be appreciated thanks.
http://soundcloud.com/travisb9/lisid
@cheezitzplz: make some space for the higher frequencies for your drums. ore maybe try brighten up the kik and snare a little...saturation on a send high passed maybe?... the general structure of the tune is great, the intro is fine mate i think it works. the breakdown is i little random maybe change some elements throw in a fill here and there.
@hansvictoriayeeros: ok this first tune is a deep one sounding ok. the mids may have to much bottem end, the snare needs to be more brighter... maybe layer it with a clap or something. but with a cleaner mix this tune is big.
2nd tune u had the 4x4 beat. the intro is good mate, like the white noise sidechained, and when the extra percution comes in although it becomes repetitive after while. like how bothe are going hope to hear them when thheir finished.
any feedback would be appreciated thanks.
http://soundcloud.com/travisb9/lisid
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must post feedback on at least 3 other members clips. shouldn't be too 'complicated'. ha 

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marzz you know better than that 

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Sup!
DJ Rephlex: leave feedback for others
Travis baker: Link doesnt work.
Jimbeaux: Nasty tune. Has a raw old school feel to it. I love all your effects. The ONLY thing I can reccomend it to sit that main mean growl into the mix a bit more. TO me it sticks out a bit too much.
Hansvictoriayeeros: 1st tune: Nuts. Sounds like to angry robot shit. I wish the snare punched me in the face though, it almost sounds like its low passed? Your snare should be bumped at 200hz a little and it should have a good amount of high end. Id also relax on the triplet kicks a bit, it sounds too robotic. I do love your pads though..
2nd tune: Not my genre or style but good work so far, id keep developing off of it.
Ascian: Although its not my favorite, Crazy new school style. Love those reese growls btw. I can't find anything wrong great crazy tune!
Heres my track, I feel a bit awkward now because of my old school sounds but hey w/e. Thanks for the feedback.
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DJ Rephlex: leave feedback for others

Travis baker: Link doesnt work.
Jimbeaux: Nasty tune. Has a raw old school feel to it. I love all your effects. The ONLY thing I can reccomend it to sit that main mean growl into the mix a bit more. TO me it sticks out a bit too much.
Hansvictoriayeeros: 1st tune: Nuts. Sounds like to angry robot shit. I wish the snare punched me in the face though, it almost sounds like its low passed? Your snare should be bumped at 200hz a little and it should have a good amount of high end. Id also relax on the triplet kicks a bit, it sounds too robotic. I do love your pads though..
2nd tune: Not my genre or style but good work so far, id keep developing off of it.
Ascian: Although its not my favorite, Crazy new school style. Love those reese growls btw. I can't find anything wrong great crazy tune!
Heres my track, I feel a bit awkward now because of my old school sounds but hey w/e. Thanks for the feedback.
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Re: WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *
whatMassAphekt wrote:marzz you know better than that

http://www.mixcloud.com/Bigironrecords/the-chamber-files-11/

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@Houston Weather : I really like the sounds you used throughout the tune, The sound kinda cracks me up a little, It reminds me of something funny (in a good way) I just can't put my finger on it.
@Complicated : I think you should definitely continue to make that track! I like the ambient notes going on in the back. I think maybe the ambient sound could be a little quieter at first. (listening on headphones so I'm not sure about on a system). I really like the start of the vocals as well. Good start
@DJ Rephlex : I really like the range of sounds you used in the drop. I tried to do that same sort of thing when making a drop just a bit ago but couldn't get it to sound right. Good job man!
@antman : I like the beat at the start of your song! Especially with the slight panning, it gives it a cool effect on headphones
Here's my track so far. I still have a few things that I feel need to be worked out more, but let me know what you think
Thanks!
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@Complicated : I think you should definitely continue to make that track! I like the ambient notes going on in the back. I think maybe the ambient sound could be a little quieter at first. (listening on headphones so I'm not sure about on a system). I really like the start of the vocals as well. Good start

@DJ Rephlex : I really like the range of sounds you used in the drop. I tried to do that same sort of thing when making a drop just a bit ago but couldn't get it to sound right. Good job man!
@antman : I like the beat at the start of your song! Especially with the slight panning, it gives it a cool effect on headphones

Here's my track so far. I still have a few things that I feel need to be worked out more, but let me know what you think

Thanks!
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really good intro mate.
I like it
http://www.mixcloud.com/Bigironrecords/the-chamber-files-11/

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@ jimbeaux : I liked the intro. Strong. Good track The bass was marvelous. How'd you make it? Drums are really smooth and well mixed. Kick could use some slight mixing.
@ mthrfnk : great idea. I like the reverse bringing in the kick at the 2nd break. The synths were really good. Bass was nice but could use some beefing up
@ Ascian : amazing synth in the intro. Bass made my head spin. SO SICKK. bass at the 1:50 bit was amazing. Crunchy like salad.
@ antman : That song was stunning. Great work ant. The bass was chilling. Love from staten bro
Great stuff.
@ Neurom : The bass was really good. Really liked the panning on the breakdown synths
. Loved the bit at :57 - :58 with the bass pan. Really cool effects
All great tracks! Sorry if I missed some people. I'll get to all of them in a bit

WIP of mine: posted it earlier but I forgot to review and post feedback. My fault
: First time on this thread sorry!
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@ mthrfnk : great idea. I like the reverse bringing in the kick at the 2nd break. The synths were really good. Bass was nice but could use some beefing up


@ Ascian : amazing synth in the intro. Bass made my head spin. SO SICKK. bass at the 1:50 bit was amazing. Crunchy like salad.


@ antman : That song was stunning. Great work ant. The bass was chilling. Love from staten bro


@ Neurom : The bass was really good. Really liked the panning on the breakdown synths



All great tracks! Sorry if I missed some people. I'll get to all of them in a bit


WIP of mine: posted it earlier but I forgot to review and post feedback. My fault


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ohh sorry lol forgot mateMassAphekt wrote:marzz you know better than that

http://www.mixcloud.com/Bigironrecords/the-chamber-files-11/

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http://soundcloud.com/travisb9/lisid-1
this link should work... i have already given feedback
thanks
this link should work... i have already given feedback
thanks
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@travis baker : song sounds very smooth all the way through. I like it. Very relaxing.
@Marzz : Thanks for the feedback!
Also, There really isn't anything more relaxing than the sound of rain and thunder 
@Marzz : Thanks for the feedback!


Newest Full Track.. NeuroM - Looking back
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NeuroM- Massive Track. Seriously. Didn't like the drop off at first but the stalled out drop really works.
Marzz- Reminded me of Jurassic Park. Good sound, just wondering what you're going to do with it.
Travis- Ultra Smooth man, felt like something that would be playing during a James Bond sex scene.
Complicated- Yes, continue with this. You have a potential banger on your hands. The sample at the end was meh, but other than that its good.
This song is something I started working on a while back, then put it up. Wondering if this has any potential or not.
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Marzz- Reminded me of Jurassic Park. Good sound, just wondering what you're going to do with it.

Travis- Ultra Smooth man, felt like something that would be playing during a James Bond sex scene.

Complicated- Yes, continue with this. You have a potential banger on your hands. The sample at the end was meh, but other than that its good.
This song is something I started working on a while back, then put it up. Wondering if this has any potential or not.
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@Houston Weather : Thanks man
I really appreciate it! I've actually been feeling the same way about the first drop, and was thinking about removing the 2 notes right before so that its a suspended drop like the second one. I really appreciate the feedback!
As for the shaq-kahn-wip, I think it does definitely have potential, and I feel kinda the same way with the first drop-ish point where it has the mortal kombat vocals saying finish him. It might be cool to have a bit of silence right before that happens. Just a thought.

As for the shaq-kahn-wip, I think it does definitely have potential, and I feel kinda the same way with the first drop-ish point where it has the mortal kombat vocals saying finish him. It might be cool to have a bit of silence right before that happens. Just a thought.
Newest Full Track.. NeuroM - Looking back
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Houston Weather
I don't like it musically, not to say it's bad...not working for me. The main thing you should be worrying about though is the mix, things sound quite a bit muddy from what I can tell.
Travis Baker
Loving this. The pad sounds great, the percussion is awesome. Everything is well mixed. I cannot criticize this, aside from the abrupt stop at 1:22--which isn't so bad anyway. Great job!
Marzz
Loving those field recordings, so nice and detailed! Very relaxing and unique. Perhaps a small amount of wind would make it better.
This is something, I just did...22bpm, because there isn't enough of that.
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I don't like it musically, not to say it's bad...not working for me. The main thing you should be worrying about though is the mix, things sound quite a bit muddy from what I can tell.
Travis Baker
Loving this. The pad sounds great, the percussion is awesome. Everything is well mixed. I cannot criticize this, aside from the abrupt stop at 1:22--which isn't so bad anyway. Great job!
Marzz
Loving those field recordings, so nice and detailed! Very relaxing and unique. Perhaps a small amount of wind would make it better.
This is something, I just did...22bpm, because there isn't enough of that.
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Jrisreal
Thanks for the feedback mate. Really like the 22 bpm stuff never in my life have I seen something of this caliber. Explore this
Really good. Chill as hell and the synths were really cool. those synth stabs are emotion and passion filled :') The bass was really good. How'd you make that?
Houston Weather
Thanks for the feedback man. Really liked the comparison to Jurassic Park.
One of my favorite movies
Onto your wip:
Really liked this one man. Great idea. This is very good. It could use some more percussion rhythms. The wobble was really not in my taste and the mortal kombat samples are the icing on the cake. Where did you get them?
I can never find them.
NeuroM
Thanks for the feedback man
Here's my new W.I.P: The pad is a secret
Feedback would be nice (Ambient/Minimal)
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Thanks for the feedback mate. Really like the 22 bpm stuff never in my life have I seen something of this caliber. Explore this


Houston Weather
Thanks for the feedback man. Really liked the comparison to Jurassic Park.



Really liked this one man. Great idea. This is very good. It could use some more percussion rhythms. The wobble was really not in my taste and the mortal kombat samples are the icing on the cake. Where did you get them?

NeuroM
Thanks for the feedback man


Here's my new W.I.P: The pad is a secret

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