Little chilled tune that Jake Dubber and I have been playing around with for a while and here is the finished result! Would love some feedback on this, also free download. Enjoy...
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Jake Dubber & Dan Grosvenor - Archive (Chilled/Hip-Hop)
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BrummieDan
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Re: Jake Dubber & Dan Grosvenor - Archive (Chilled/Hip-Hop)
Easy mate! I like what your doing here, do love the ambiant moods
I personally would change the snare reverb, for me this kind of soundscape relishes that long-lushes reverb: this one sounds like a gated cellar, if you follow? It's also quite forward.
I would re-balance the samples (if thats what they are) that come and go: Jump out too hard for me with the current levels.
I would also like to hear some more variation in places: I do it myslef, and end up shredding my whole track to pieces till it's right
Conjur up something that would allow us to momentarily breathe - detract us from whats going on and re-introduce whats there so it's fresh again!? Myabe listen from the begining and get stuck on a loop that lasts one beat at a random place: Might provoke something interesting? I've done it by accident too many times that I care to mention and, you know what,.. It worked lol
I still think it has a long way to go, but the ideas there mate keep it up!
Hope this helps mate,
Artery.
I personally would change the snare reverb, for me this kind of soundscape relishes that long-lushes reverb: this one sounds like a gated cellar, if you follow? It's also quite forward.
I would re-balance the samples (if thats what they are) that come and go: Jump out too hard for me with the current levels.
I would also like to hear some more variation in places: I do it myslef, and end up shredding my whole track to pieces till it's right
I still think it has a long way to go, but the ideas there mate keep it up!
Hope this helps mate,
Artery.
Constantly working on production,..
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BrummieDan
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Re: Jake Dubber & Dan Grosvenor - Archive (Chilled/Hip-Hop)
Cheers for the extensive feedback on the track bro! Really appreciate it. Yeah i think we will be looking at this track before realising it properly for variation and better mastering on the samples.
I'll keep you posted on what happens to it, thanks!
I'll keep you posted on what happens to it, thanks!
Re: Jake Dubber & Dan Grosvenor - Archive (Chilled/Hip-Hop)
No problem at all! - I myself need to constant reminding that the BD needs to be,.. Big: It's a sub-genre to Dance music, figures lolBrummieDan wrote:Cheers for the extensive feedback on the track bro! Really appreciate it. Yeah i think we will be looking at this track before realising it properly for variation and better mastering on the samples. I'll keep you posted on what happens to it, thanks!
Artery
Constantly working on production,..
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