My first tune! Need help/criticism [warning: brostep]

[Justin Bays]

This is a short clip of a work in progress I wanted to post here because I really have no idea what I'm doing and wanted some help...this is just the drop [everything else is in pieces at the moment] but I wanted to post it in this early stage so maybe you guys could give me some tips on direction - I'm especially looking for advice on mixing and getting everything to sound more clear and defined. Basically did it all with massive and zebra..i know most of you guys hate this stuff but i didn't know where else to post it! thanks


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[wub]

Seems alright, got all the parts that makes it a brostep tune. Would need to hear the full track before could comment re; direction.

[Snarfie]

some pretty insane sound design for a "first tune"

[Ruckr23]

some pretty insane sound design for a "first tune"

Right??

[puzzlefactory]

some pretty insane sound design for a "first tune"

I concur...

[Phatso]

maybe he spent the time to get the sound design right before attempting to make a tune. I really liked it. good job man

[puzzlefactory]

Yeah, I really like it too. The sound design and production is top notch. That's why the sceptic in me thinks that this wasn't made by a beginner.

If he really is just starting out, then kudos to him. He certainly has some natural skills. But like I say, the sceptic in me says that this track has been made by someone who has been making music for a while...

[Justin Bays]

I'm actually really flattered that some of you think I've been producing for a while I've been playing music since I was a kid but this is my first crack at production/mixing and electronic music in general...I did take quite a bit of time to learn my synths and DAW in and out though so that may be why...I fiddled with stuff but this is my first proper tune. Thanks guys

[omegaweapon]

i think its great. i think the kick could use more punch.. although all the high freqs are there and it sounds good

[DrBlank]

This is so sick man.