Nozeak - Some Random song/ Feedback please.

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Nozeak
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Nozeak - Some Random song/ Feedback please.

Post by Nozeak » Fri Aug 31, 2012 7:32 pm

I know it doesn't sound great. But this is my first. Need feed back to grow.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DOUeEja-Idc&feature=plcp

Please let me know what to improve/change/edit/delete/throw away/stop making LMAO
I know there is alot to fix. Let me know if any of it it salvageable.
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Re: Nozeak - Some Random song/ Feedback please.

Post by webs » Fri Aug 31, 2012 8:40 pm

Like the ambient vibe but I feel like the kick build up is sort of standard and a played out idea. The kicks themselves are cool, they kinda pop out at ya. I like the sound of your lead, but not a huge fan of wobblefests. (no offense intended). You could add a melody in there somewhere too. Maybe something higher up.
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Re: Nozeak - Some Random song/ Feedback please.

Post by Nozeak » Sat Sep 01, 2012 3:58 am

Thanks for the tips. So no wobbles at all or make them better?
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