Need some feedback !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz

[substantialdubs]

i would love some constructive comments about my tracks if people have time. thanks http://soundcloud.com/substantialdubs

[JTreeZY]

I listened to two of em and I like all of the sounds you used and created individually but as a whole i think they could use some more life to them like a little more creativity i guess.. not bad tho

[KiddGimmick]

You seem to be good at mixing. The bass sounds are rock solid. The vocals may be a wee bit too loud, but they are good regardless. I can't find much wrong with this. It's dope. The snare sits back in the mix a little, and kick doesn't have much high end definition, but that may have been what you were going for? Scratch the kick thing, it is masked by the bass high end. It showed up during the wobbles. The wobbles could use a stronger low mid/low range. Maybe give the sub more energy, borrowed from the kick? The creative juices are definite though. Sorry if anything I said offended you, as it was not intended. Keep up the good work.

I listened to your music, and made an assessment based on what I could offer. Please do the same for me.

[substantialdubs]

You seem to be good at mixing. The bass sounds are rock solid. The vocals may be a wee bit too loud, but they are good regardless. I can't find much wrong with this. It's dope. The snare sits back in the mix a little, and kick doesn't have much high end definition, but that may have been what you were going for? Scratch the kick thing, it is masked by the bass high end. It showed up during the wobbles. The wobbles could use a stronger low mid/low range. Maybe give the sub more energy, borrowed from the kick? The creative juices are definite though. Sorry if anything I said offended you, as it was not intended. Keep up the good work.

I listened to your music, and made an assessment based on what I could offer. Please do the same for me.

Thanks for commenting on my tunes, i didnt take any offence in what you wrote about my tracks as they were constructive comments and that is what i was looking for. I took a listen of the track you have up on here and it sounds good ! the only thing i can say is at times you have 2 or 3 bass sounds playing at the same time and it sounds a bit to much. But on the other hand you have used some nice sounds and basses your track is very clear and its refreshing to here someone that isnt making skrillex influenced tune also the drums are sounding nice and sequenced well to.

[Rascal94]

Dude... that is sick as fuck what you have going on. I love it. Especially the toms or whatever you have in the second part of scum bags. It's very clear. But the snare does need a bit more thump. Try increasing like the 200 area and it will sound sickk.

[substantialdubs]

thank you for you comment im glad you like it.