Deep, Dark, Tribal, Dubstep WIP. Criticism please.

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Deep, Dark, Tribal, Dubstep WIP. Criticism please.

Post by Slim Dubs » Mon Oct 22, 2012 3:07 pm

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Hi there, I know of a few slight tweaks that need to be done. Make the breaks less empty and a few minor EQing things. But I would love some constructive criticism on whether it might suck or not.

I've only added some Adlimit and slight EQing, no mastering done as of yet.

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Re: Deep, Dark, Tribal, Dubstep WIP. Criticism please.

Post by wub » Mon Oct 22, 2012 3:33 pm

Liking the panning delay on some of those hits in there, nice atmospherics and good use of the stereo field. Liking the more stripped back beat when it comes in after the break, felt a bit of variety on the hits would give some variation though.

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Re: Deep, Dark, Tribal, Dubstep WIP. Criticism please.

Post by Slim Dubs » Mon Oct 22, 2012 3:49 pm

wub wrote:Liking the panning delay on some of those hits in there, nice atmospherics and good use of the stereo field. Liking the more stripped back beat when it comes in after the break, felt a bit of variety on the hits would give some variation though.
Cheers for the reply Wub. By 'hits' I assume you mean the snares after the break? And I'm glad you noticed the stereo spreading. Take it easy.
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Re: Deep, Dark, Tribal, Dubstep WIP. Criticism please.

Post by dipswitch1 » Tue Oct 23, 2012 11:36 pm

really like it!

the only thing that disturbs me a bit is the overly long period of calm between 2:46 and 3:39 - there is nothing to keep the crowd moving and not enough for them to wait for more. if i would rinse the tune as a dj i would be highly irritated.

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Re: Deep, Dark, Tribal, Dubstep WIP. Criticism please.

Post by PWN101 » Wed Oct 24, 2012 3:28 am

Pretty damn good track. Not quite what I prefer, sound wise, because I am into more glitchstep, pounding tracks, but this is a great track nonetheless. I love the sounds used in it, and all I could offer as advice is to maybe throw in a little more bass in certain parts. I feel like there is a little bit of a pause in certain areas where there could be a little more synthesizer action going on. But like I said, I am slightly biased. Good stuff.

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Re: Deep, Dark, Tribal, Dubstep WIP. Criticism please.

Post by Blast It » Wed Oct 24, 2012 3:38 am

the progression in the percussion is ace it keeps your attention very well, although i think you should do something more creative with the build and space inbetween drop. there just isnt enough to catch your attention and to accentuate the build. Also i recommend camel crusher, free vst. slap it on everything. Its a great compression/distortion unite. I use it on pretty much everything
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