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Onyxcloud
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Onyxcloud-Only at Night(Chillstep)

Post by Onyxcloud » Mon Nov 12, 2012 5:19 am

so I just slapped on chillstep because I get a super chill vibe from this track I have produced....

it isn''t yet finished but I thought I would share it anyways (still needs mastering)

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Re: Onyxcloud-Only at Night(Chillstep)

Post by Onyxcloud » Mon Nov 12, 2012 8:21 am

.... just wait until I add vocals. :Q:

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Re: Onyxcloud-Only at Night(Chillstep)

Post by RIG-RAG » Mon Nov 12, 2012 8:33 pm

drop came abruptly, or should i say the mid bass that comes in at 14 seconds in to soon ( take out some low end then slowly bring in your low end towards the drop. melody is cool but its very loud and over taking your snare. the mid bass sounds good but seems to loud also. snare needs more high end. if you want large leads over a even larger bass line MAKE sure they are sitting in different spots of the spectrum, sounds and structure are ok but your mix down needs some tweaks.
oh an your vocal samples are cool, i wanna use em' haha

keep it up man

(p.s. do you have a sub? )

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Re: Onyxcloud-Only at Night(Chillstep)

Post by Loyset » Mon Nov 12, 2012 11:05 pm

What he^ said & the vocals at the beginning are a tad too loud. Love your panned bells!

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Re: Onyxcloud-Only at Night(Chillstep)

Post by HoogerJ » Tue Nov 13, 2012 12:14 am

Yeah, really diggin the overall vibe. Try to look at your levels again while doing the mixdown. Midrange is a bit too present, i think. If your drums are hitting 10db, try the lead mid-bass at around 15-17 db-ish.

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Re: Onyxcloud-Only at Night(Chillstep)

Post by Onyxcloud » Tue Nov 13, 2012 12:27 am

wow thanks guys for all the great feedback, definitely going to help out on this track.... I'm fairly new to producing so it always helps to have people that know whats up.

btw those movie samples were like 10 bucks and i got a whole crap load of them.

I have to remember where I got them they're really fun to play with :D

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Re: Onyxcloud-Only at Night(Chillstep)

Post by Onyxcloud » Tue Nov 13, 2012 3:57 am

Hey... so I still need a decent set of studio monitors.... I'm fairly new to producing.... not new to music.

but I do own a pair of beyerdynamic dt 770 pro studio headphones so I can somewhat hear the sound in the music....

I took a look at my mix earlier and did some tweaks to the track.... let me know if it sounds any better

thanks

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