Personal Monster (growlstep)

[HerMix]

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As you can hear I am not a professional, but im not a noob either!
I would really appreaciate feedback, also if you like it check out my other tracks and follow me.

[wub]

Not really vibing this. Kick is too 'poppy' and hasn't got any weight, sounds like there is a lot of distortion going on in there, and the midrange yoi loop when it arrives dominates the mix to the point where it overpowers the other elements and just repeats itself over and over. Can't find anything positive about this tune, I'm afraid

[Electric_Head]

Where's the actual beat?
Can't just bang out a beat with no feel or rhythm.
This is very noobish unfortunately.
You may not be one but you are producing fairly random, unstructured music.

[HerMix]

Ohh... Sorry you feel that way, I was actually pretty proud of it, but guess it was all nonsense.

[Dustwyrm]

Don't be hard on yourself HerMix, I haven't listened to it yet (at work) but it sounds as it may be missing some generic aspects regarding flow and structure. This is easily fixed with some intro work, buildups and transitions. Maybe try spending a bit more time on it to get it to flow like a song. Almost everyone here is non-professional I'll check out your tune later today. Keep trekkin bro