Selektah - Bench Talk (VIP) *17 Year Old Producer*

[Ecliptic_Dub]

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Here's this new track i've been working on for a couple of days, nothing complicated,just nice and easy. Give er' a listen let me know what you think, and If you get the chance check out my other tunes up on soundcloud as well:] Thanks!
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- Selektah

[Sioux]

The track sounds to be pretty well produced but I think it lacks something that most bedroom producers these days lack; unique/distinct sound. That is to say, there is nothing specifically "wrong" or unpleasing about the track but there's nothing particularly eye-catching (or ear-catching as the case may be) about it neither. Although if I were to pick something out that I enjoyed from the track it would be the bassline.

Hope that was some use to you

[Ecliptic_Dub]

Thanks for the positive feedback:] really means a lot to hear about my track and what I can improve on, because there is always room for improvement! so again, thank you!

[SKIN E]

Could have shortened the intro up.. or added maybe a new high hat or no kick in the first 8 bars or something just to keep it from sounding so repetitive.. Got some nice sounds your working with but do feel like your notes could be better.. bigup brother keep moving!

[Nibzz]

Yeah man like the lads said before, the ideas are here, just add some variation like Skni E said, makes a lot of difference, more than I ever thought lol.
Other than that just try different stuff to get that original vibe or sound. Export the bass and reverse parts, export and process a little, pan, rise, all this kinda thing, mess around and see what that bass sounds like differently.

[Ecliptic_Dub]

I will be putting out the original version soon, I just wanted to hear the feedback for the VIP, And thank you all for the responses. It really helps me out hearing what I can improve on, or add into a track, means a lot! Thank you guys!

[Ecliptic_Dub]

Soundcloud Here is the original version of my song "Bench Talk" tell me if this one is better! thanks:]