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Mixedpotatoes
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by Mixedpotatoes » Tue Dec 04, 2012 2:48 pm
The heavy parts are insane, and you do them well. The chill parts feel a little off, but I can't put my finger on quite what. The voices could be cooler if you synchronized them a little better to the music

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Stimulant
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by Stimulant » Tue Dec 04, 2012 9:48 pm
Yeah, your melodic parts are a little off. I think its just the chord progression. BUT, your heavy side really shines in this, hahhaa, good work man
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Murder Musket
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by Murder Musket » Wed Dec 05, 2012 2:59 am
Damn, how did you get so many comments on this , did you use cloudkillers or something like that?
While this kind of stuff isn't my cup of tea, your tune feels cohesive and sounds fine overall. My advice would be to give the high end of the snare some more volume, and to ditch the "gayyyy" vocal sample(Or at least mix it into the background a bit). It sounds pretty out of place to me. keep it up!
EDIT: my bad I critiqued the song in your sig.
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skunktech
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by skunktech » Wed Dec 05, 2012 4:26 am
I have to be honest I didn't like the drop.
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TheSoapmaker
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by TheSoapmaker » Wed Dec 05, 2012 10:08 am
Murder Musket wrote:Damn, how did you get so many comments on this , did you use cloudkillers or something like that?
While this kind of stuff isn't my cup of tea, your tune feels cohesive and sounds fine overall. My advice would be to give the high end of the snare some more volume, and to ditch the "gayyyy" vocal sample(Or at least mix it into the background a bit). It sounds pretty out of place to me. keep it up!
EDIT: my bad I critiqued the song in your sig.
Well, mr. You've listened to wrong track :p Listen to the track I linked, not in my signature.
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TheSoapmaker
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by TheSoapmaker » Wed Dec 05, 2012 8:51 pm
Mixedpotatoes wrote:The heavy parts are insane, and you do them well. The chill parts feel a little off, but I can't put my finger on quite what. The voices could be cooler if you synchronized them a little better to the music

well, thank you, sir!

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