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ChaserDubs
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Chaser - C.l.i.t

Post by ChaserDubs » Sat Dec 08, 2012 8:29 pm

So here's another track im making. It's still a WIP.

Can i get some feedback from u guys :)

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Murder Musket
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Re: Chaser - Thinner

Post by Murder Musket » Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:03 pm

Real solid sound design on this. The what vocal is a bit loud and over used imo, also the scream at 1:06 sounds a bit out of place to me, but overall this is sick. keep it up!
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Re: Chaser - Thinner

Post by ChaserDubs » Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:28 pm

Thanks for the feedback!

Haha true about the vocal. Ive been working on this track for a while and i dont really hear the vocals anymore lol. Im gonna delete some.
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Re: Chaser - Thinner

Post by cubefruit » Sun Dec 09, 2012 4:19 am

Wow this is actually a lot better than I thought it was going to be haha! Good job man, really diggin that riddim
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Re: Chaser - Thinner

Post by mixedbyLUSH » Sun Dec 09, 2012 8:14 am

Dope track overall. In the first drop if you cut amount the vocal comes in by about half it would work better I think. Or if you were going to have them that frequently, do it as delays rather than straight up WHAT WHAT WHAT. You know? Sick track though, love the synth.

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Re: Chaser - Thinner

Post by ChaserDubs » Sun Dec 09, 2012 4:02 pm

cubefruit wrote:Wow this is actually a lot better than I thought it was going to be haha! Good job man, really diggin that riddim
Thanks!!
mixedbyLUSH wrote:Dope track overall. In the first drop if you cut amount the vocal comes in by about half it would work better I think. Or if you were going to have them that frequently, do it as delays rather than straight up WHAT WHAT WHAT. You know? Sick track though, love the synth.

If you finish this track and want a mix or master hit me up!
Thanks :) .. I will work on the what what :).. To much of it yes lol
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Re: Chaser - Thinner

Post by Samuel_L_Damnson » Sun Dec 09, 2012 4:33 pm

Nice midrange synth man :). has a real nice back an forth motion to it, kinda coki-esque!
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ChaserDubs
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Re: Chaser - Thinner

Post by ChaserDubs » Mon Dec 10, 2012 7:22 pm

Sinestepper wrote:Nice midrange synth man :). has a real nice back an forth motion to it, kinda coki-esque!
Thank you man. Appreciate :):)

**Update**

Added a bit background sound. Also removed some "what what" at first drop.
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Re: Chaser - Thinner

Post by ChaserDubs » Tue Dec 11, 2012 8:49 pm

haha used some samples from the movie Jay and Silent Bob Strike Back! Removed the scream to make place for the clit commander :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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