Feedback Thread

[charlystargirl]

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Choppy electro-house from me. Feedback much appreciated

[AllNightDayDream]

@Tenebriated: Love the funkiness. The bass is ridiculous, and that classic house organ sound is a favorite of mine. The only thing is the vocal. It sounds too distant? Just a tad. If it's going through filters, maybe open em up a bit? Or just compress em a bit more and push em out. Soundin ace regardless. Snagged the DL

@bkwsk: Love the sample selection, sorta on par with what I try to do with the miscellaneous metallic/tap sounds. Not a flaw to be found really, sounds huge. I'd bump it in the car. Very complete package, can't figure out why you'd need feedback on that one haha

@OllieScott (feeling): Big old school club vibes on this one. However, i'm not a fan of the kick, or at least one of the layers of it. And like someone else said, I'd check if you can get some more punch from it in the mix.

Could really use some input on this one. Not sure about certain elements. Please be as harsh as you like

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[OllieScott]

@allnightdaydream: yeah I've changed up the kick now, thanks for the feedback though.
Really feeling your track, only element that felt out of place to be was the delayed guitar sound (2.38ish) and the female vocal sounds a bit to prominent to the other vocal imo.

@tenebriated: Tasty remix, although theres loads of garagy brandy remixes about.

[OllieScott]

New bit I'm working on, still wanna add some variation and some other bits but wanted to get some feedback so far.

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[Tenebriated]

^ tidy

ty for the love guys <3

[Dystinkt]

out to everyone in this thread, some big tunes!

bit of foamo/jackbeats type house

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[Tenebriated]

well i know absolutely fuck all about that kind of house so i cant really help, but it sounds pretty professional to me man. new bit from me:

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[Tenebriated]

double post sorry!

[VoteYes]

Allnightdaydream: Really feeling the track. Especially like the kick and how it progresses from the intro. Tbh I don't think you need the vocals in it at all. Both sound a little cheesy to me. I'm also gonna disagree with the above poster and say I quite liked the delayed guitar. Would maybe even use it more throughout the track.

Tenbriated: You need to try and cut out some of the background noise that comes with the vocal sample. Can hear it quite clearly. Like the drums and bass but I find the hook to quite cheesy. The melody anyway, the sound is ok. Think you really need another element in there too, another section, to keep it interesting.

I finished 3 tracks using largely the same sounds and they have a similar aesthetic. Two at house bpms and the third at 140. Not the kind of 140 that gets posted in the dubs forum though so not gonna bother.

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[bkwsk]

@ruari89: interesting music. I like the first approach, but it seems to me that, when present, the kick is a bit too boxy for my taste, it muds the mix a little. The third one could use a little less stereo processing on the low-end imo.

@Tenebriated: bringing it back to the old! I really like the vibes of this, but I think the vocal would benefit from a little less volume and some reverb/delay, possibly with automations, to keep it interesting throughout the track.


Some new music by me:

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Cheers!

[OllieScott]

@tenebriated: Not to keen on the melody myself, feels a bit to cheesy. Vocal could be turned down and effected abit more imo

@Ruari89: Feeling this one, Think more of a punchy snare rather might work better maybe. Listening to rest of your clips, it sounds like your shaping your sound nicely, keep it up

@Bkwsk: Nice track, feel like the stabs could variate a bit more though

and my new one
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[Tenebriated]

No activity in here for ages but I just wanted to say everyone's stuff is sounding tight and the advice has been helping a lot!

[ezza]

and my new one
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Man this is big! that bassline is so nice, what synth did you make it on?

[Klesherdubs]

nice

[cacambo]

Hi, I've recently started making some tunes and this is my first effort at house... let me know what you think, I can take it!

To be honest I don't really know all that much about house but I thought I'd give it a go as I'm getting into it a bit more these days.

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[kaiten]

New original bit from Melo & myself.

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[Klesherdubs]

@cacambo : .. you mastering is well and sounds are clear.. smooth and well balance.. the track itself though is a little bit boring because of the slow and steady progression.. it isn't a bad thing just isn't my tatse.. for your first couple house efforts .. smooth job mate.. !

@kaiten : you beat is banging my walls.. feeling the intricate vibes and sounds.. mixdown is good and master is set cleann.. hi hats pinch my skin with a common tickle I'm just loving this track.. keepin it in the right natural place with the creative flow.. feelin this one bruvv.. big up ..

[kaiten]

@Klesherdubs: Thanks for the feedback man, glad you're feeling it!

[cacambo]

@Klesherdubs: Cheers for the feedback, yeah I thought it was a bit boring too! My main thing was trying to get the track sounding good, then I can get some better ideas in the mix later. thanks man!

[OllieScott]

Man this is big! that bassline is so nice, what synth did you make it on?

think it was a thor patch, cant remember 100% though

@cacambo - this is nice, defo think it could be a bit more interesting, not sure if I like the stab layer that comes in at 2.47. Doesnt fit well or feel like its needed imo

@kaiten - can't really think much of to give feedback on, but thats really nice tune.