Suspense - Beautiful (Original-Chill)

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Suspense - Beautiful (Original-Chill)

Post by Suspense » Tue Jan 15, 2013 4:11 am

A very laid back dubstepish track.
This is my third finished track. And I have only been doing this two-three months so feedback is appreciated. I'm sure I have a long way to go.

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Re: Suspense - Beautiful (Original-Chill)

Post by wub » Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:47 am

Kick/snare are both quite weak in the mix, and could do with bringing up so they're more prominent...maybe some layering to give them a bit more weight. The wobbles are likewise a bit thin sounding and could also benefit from some layering/modulation/EQing to give them a fuller sound.

Drum and wobble programming is fairly constant the whole way through, maybe try varying the arrangement slightly towards the end so that it breaks up the repetitive vibe that creeps in.

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Re: Suspense - Beautiful (Original-Chill)

Post by Suspense » Tue Jan 15, 2013 6:20 pm

I went ahead and upped the levels of the kick and snare.. Not in this mix but in a new one.. I agree it helped a bit.. I'm not sure how to vary the arrangement yet but I'm getting to it.Thanks for the feedback
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Re: Suspense - Beautiful (Original-Chill)

Post by Suspense » Thu Jan 17, 2013 5:21 pm

Hoping for more feedback
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Re: Suspense - Beautiful (Original-Chill)

Post by cnnc » Thu Jan 17, 2013 7:28 pm

I think it is a pretty good track. you can feed it with nice female vocals, it would sound better;)

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Re: Suspense - Beautiful (Original-Chill)

Post by Suspense » Sun Jan 20, 2013 8:20 pm

Yea I would love some female vocals on this.. but don't have any :(
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