Working on a new track - Advice needed

[cnnc]

I am working on a new song, i just made an intro so far. However, i am not totally satisfied with the intro, sounds, mastering... I need advices on this intro. Just tell me which parts/sounds you like or didnt like, or what should I pay attention more. Thanks in advance

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[Samuel_L_Damnson]

Im not sure abou the reverb on the kick, the risers seem too loud (slightly) and the crazy panning on the drums maybe needs toning down a little. that yoi sound sort of stands out a little too much i think, its definately a good start though, the melodies and chords are nice too
Edit: Btw highlight the sound cloud link and press the sound cloud button on top of the post editor to embed the tune (using the [soundcloud}Your link goes here[/soundcloud] thing)

[cnnc]

Im not sure abou the reverb on the kick, the risers seem too loud (slightly) and the crazy panning on the drums maybe needs toning down a little. that yoi sound sort of stands out a little too much i think, its definately a good start though, the melodies and chords are nice too
Edit: Btw highlight the sound cloud link and press the sound cloud button on top of the post editor to embed the tune (using the [soundcloud}Your link goes here[/soundcloud] thing)

Thank you very much! I will consider your advices

[shinra]

keep your kick in the middle, i like your fluttery chords & use a return for the reverb on your kick, putting it straight on the channel is making it way too weightless. well done though.

[cnnc]

keep your kick in the middle, i like your fluttery chords & use a return for the reverb on your kick, putting it straight on the channel is making it way too weightless. well done though.

thank you!