some brostep - Reverie

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some brostep - Reverie

Post by rapmastarj » Thu Feb 07, 2013 4:13 am

New poster here, any feedback is appreciated. :)

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Re: some brostep - Reverie

Post by M3TROPOLI5 » Thu Feb 07, 2013 9:54 am

wow very nice intro! you blended very nicely~

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Re: some brostep - Reverie

Post by reviewmaster » Thu Feb 07, 2013 10:03 am

Hey there! That intro was really beautiful, as in, it moved me. Did you write / record it? Production values after the drop aren't too bad to my ear either, although EQ wise it could do with a little more separation and definition there. Rhythmically there is one bass drum in the first half / calm bit of the drop that doesn't seem to fit (the one that has a triplet feel) with the instrumentation, although that feel works with the second half just fine. I think what you've got here is great, it just needs a little more work to get the sections to flow a little better into one another, and for the over all sound to gel a bit more. So my verdict, very encouraging, stay inspired, keep up the good work!

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Re: some brostep - Reverie

Post by rapmastarj » Thu Feb 07, 2013 3:17 pm

It's me singing and everything, yeah. The bass drum thing makes sense I guess I didnt really notice it, the first part of the drop is straight and then the second is with a triplet feel, i guess thats why its good to have a second set of ears :P Really appreciate the comments guys!

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