First dubstep track I've done with a rapper, opinions?

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Re: First dubstep track I've done with a rapper, opinions?

Post by mik3 » Thu Feb 21, 2013 1:34 am

Really like that! Nice combination of the female focals then guy rapping works well! Just seems a shame he finishes at 1.30 and the track goes on to 5mins without hearing him again? Really nice production wose though, wasnt a fan of the pipes sound introduced at 1.45 if im honest, but I liked it overall


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Re: First dubstep track I've done with a rapper, opinions?

Post by iamtaliesin » Thu Feb 21, 2013 5:12 pm

mik3 wrote:Really like that! Nice combination of the female focals then guy rapping works well! Just seems a shame he finishes at 1.30 and the track goes on to 5mins without hearing him again? Really nice production wose though, wasnt a fan of the pipes sound introduced at 1.45 if im honest, but I liked it overall


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Thanks for the review. I agree I wish he had at least a 2nd verse

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Re: First dubstep track I've done with a rapper, opinions?

Post by mik3 » Thu Feb 21, 2013 5:51 pm

MAybe slice up some samples from the first verse and use them in a different way in the second part? Or split the verse in two some how?
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Re: First dubstep track I've done with a rapper, opinions?

Post by koncide » Thu Feb 21, 2013 6:05 pm

Pretty nice tune. The vocals don't fit in the mix all that well tho, they sound a bit dry maybe use some reverb to glue them in a bit more?
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