Phloss - Further Onwards

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Phloss
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Phloss - Further Onwards

Post by Phloss » Tue Mar 12, 2013 6:54 pm

Something I have been workin on, been listenin to Mr Oizo Flat Bass a bit recently...

Would appreciate your thoughts forum :)

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Re: Phloss - Further Onwards

Post by wub » Wed Mar 13, 2013 6:48 am

Wasn't a massive fan of the intro, felt it was a bit on the flat side, but liking the bass when it arrives and can definitely hear the Mr Ozio vibes going on :D

The section from 1m58s onwards is a lot busier and more interesting the introductory section, liked the live sounding drums going on. Rising organ section in the second half of the tune brings in some variation, but the programming could maybe benefit from a bit more variation.

Good tune overall, definitely feel like it progresses as it goes on.
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Re: Phloss - Further Onwards

Post by Phloss » Thu Mar 14, 2013 3:04 am

after a couple days away from the track can def hear what your sayin about the intro, think im gunna pimp out the intro section a bit more with more elements rearranged from elsewhere in the track.

Useful feedback, cheers :)
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