First original tracks, need some feedback.

[Rdgnik]

Hiho ppl!

First of all, let me introduce myself , I'm 21 y/o from Brazil, who used to be a drummer, but I dn't have time to play it anymore, so I started to learn ableton n stuff about 2-3 months ago, and I just finished my original track about 10 days ago, also my very first track, then I was stuck into another one, so I decided to start over from scratch yesterday, and bam! I made a 2nd track, and I just want to show it for guys. All ITB, just dropped it on the internet.

So, 2 tracks, one kinda "trap style" and the another one a dirty dubstep track, with a lot of growls n stuff ;p hope u guys like it!

Any criticism is welcome, even if they're all negative. Thanks.

Dubstepish track~~: Set Afire!
Soundcloud

Trappy track~~ (1st one): Recoil
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Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/user/rdgnik
Facebook: http://facebook.com/itsrdgnik
Twitter: http://twitter.com/rdgnik

Cya!

[Descended]

Some sick sounds in the dubstep track dude
There is much to improve but if you can make that kindof sounds with only 3 months of experience -> props

[Rdgnik]

Woa thank you man didnt saw ur comment before, it would be nice if u can u tell me what I'm doing wrong, writing process, mixdown, master? thanks again!