AMG, &ERS - Indelible Resonance [Dubstep/hip hop]

[AMG]

Hey all... I'm back again with our 2nd track from our duo under the moniker of "A++". it's been over 6 months and we've finally found time to collab and complete this next cut. My buddy &ERS of the duo Bionic Motion produced it, and I rapped over it. If you're a fan of dubstep, and hip hop collabs I hope you'll check it out and tell us what you think. Thanks for taking the time to do so.

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[AMG]

bumpin =D

[AMG]

no opinions?

[daeMTHAFKNkim]

Needs some work mixdown/effect wise on the production side of things. Vocals sound fine though. Kind of reminds me of Deltron 3030.

Good idea though. Keep at it.

Maybe put an effect on ur vox or throw in more anger/emotions with ur vocals.

[AMG]

Props on letting me know. Do you feel as though my delivery range is lacking way too much? One thing I want to really improve on is what you brought up, my range, and if I sound like I'm ever coming off as monotone I need to focus on that. Any suggestions with the effects on the vox? I'm relaying this to my producer, so it's good to get any of this critique under the scope for future reference. Also, when you refer to the mixdown, what exactly do you mean? Does it sound like the mids and added effects aren't being translated well enough to accentuate the synths? etc. We're not getting enough feedback on what we can do to make our sound better and you're being a bigger help than you realize.